My third ship: Shadow Rail

neotravis · Post by **neotravis** » Sun Mar 29, 2009 1:02 pm

Its my third, that is all.

Swamp Fox · Post by **Swamp Fox** » Sun Mar 29, 2009 1:17 pm

Couple of quick things:
1: Is this finished? Because as it is now, the bits you have floating alongside it don't really appear to make much sense.
2: The twinrail turrets look kinda odd to me, mainly because they look like turrets, with the mounted weapons being another turret.
3: No offense, but the colors are really really irritating.

That said, I do think the shape could be turned into something interesting, and there is some potential here, especially if you put some work into the back area.

neotravis · Post by **neotravis** » Sun Mar 29, 2009 2:05 pm

1. Those floating bits are suppose to be some kind of shield. Not sure if I should improve or delete them.
2. Odd is good. But I will probably change them.
3. Will be all dark red

Billy Joe Bob · Post by **Billy Joe Bob** » Sun Mar 29, 2009 5:33 pm

You can improve the shields by adding support beams and the like. Extra armor plates *MIGHT* look good on them to add a bit of detail.

blackrider123 · Post by **blackrider123** » Sun Mar 29, 2009 5:54 pm

The colours are ok IF you add more shades to it. The design looks odd but it will look alright as a carrier if you scrap the floating parts (makes me wonder if you have parented your ship well...). The usage of parts are quite good but the shape is quite horrid. Try to make the ship wider with a more decent weaponry and set the depth of the wings properly (it will look nicer

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