May i show some of my creations?

Zoid Crusader · Post by **Zoid Crusader** » Fri Mar 13, 2009 4:01 am

ive been trying to figure that out

arne20beta · Post by **arne20beta** » Fri Mar 13, 2009 4:05 am

Check THIS thread, it'll help.

Zoid Crusader · Post by **Zoid Crusader** » Sat Mar 14, 2009 2:27 am

ITS ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Krishach · Post by **Krishach** » Sat Mar 14, 2009 2:55 am

It would REALLY help if you NEVER use the same part more than once in a similar size before you mirror the ship. You've still got massive repetition of sections, and you've tried far too hard to make them fit. I'd recommend browsing through the parts and finding replacements for the ones you had to force in to place.

bl3d4 · Post by **bl3d4** » Sat Mar 14, 2009 10:20 am

Disable to glow on the red sun in the middle.

Apart from that, its pretty good.

otocar91 · Post by **otocar91** » Sat Mar 14, 2009 12:16 pm

i see some mirroring problems on your last ship. be careful not to add pieces that cross the middle axis while creating a symmetrical ship.

blackrider123 · Post by **blackrider123** » Sat Mar 14, 2009 4:53 pm

you're improving well for a beginner, but for your newest ship, you should'nt leave blank spaces...

Zoid Crusader · Post by **Zoid Crusader** » Sun Mar 15, 2009 9:18 am

Hey just finished the first part of my next ship it dosent have any color change yet and is in production it is not near finished

the top one is its regular undeployed mode the second is its deployed mode but it is only version 1 version 2 is yet to come and do you guys have any suggestions for some custom sprite packs?

Krishach · Post by **Krishach** » Sun Mar 15, 2009 9:59 am

1) there are no feasible reason or visual indication as to why two pieces are flying tandem.
2) The triangle pieces on the outer arms make them look bad.
3) the color needs.... to be done in the first place.
4) the "deployed" and "undeployed" modes also seem to have no rhyme or reason.

I DO like the inner ship in terms of shape. Large improvement over spammier earlier ships.

Zoid Crusader · Post by **Zoid Crusader** » Sun Mar 15, 2009 8:41 pm

Hey just finished the first part of my next ship it dosent have any color change yet and is in production it is not near finished

I did say it wasnt finished right? i just threw together the wings too add a little more for now and like i said its not even half way done.

Krishach · Post by **Krishach** » Mon Mar 16, 2009 12:06 am

don't post them until they are done then, or say specifically what you want feedback on. Otherwise its fair game.