Inter(esting) Tech(ologies) Corp(oration) Showcase

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Ships by InterTech Corperation



Name: Serak Class Battleship
Description: This battleship is special for it's 'warp' drive.Often nicknamed 'Enterprise' by captains and pilots alike due to the ship's appearance.which is more or less like a particular ship from a not-so-unfamous sci-fi show.


Name: CV-15RX Galatic Roadster
Description: Fast,Cheap,Fancy.


Name: Takov Class Cruiser
Description: The Takov Class Cruiser combines sleekness,deadliness and motion sickness into a compact package.


Name: Pacifica Class Cruise Liner
Description: Built for comfort,this ship is surprisingly well armored for a liner not meant for engagements,one such ship was used as the stage for the hit movie 'Speed XIV',another underwent total existance failure as it was launched.


Name: Keejur Class Fleet Tender
Description: The Keejur Class Fleet Tender is cabable to conduct On-The-Field repairs to any ship in need,it also is able to defend itself pretty well.


Name: Jakarf Class Siege Cruiser
Description: A space cannon with engines,ideal for attacking immoblie targets from a long range.Many mistake it for an unknown ship called 'Bentus',only to realise it goes the other way.


Name: CV-150 Heavy Escort
Description: Expensive but powerful for a ship available for the public,can be seen escorting various ships whose owners are rich enough to afford,also used by mining corporations in hazardous sites.


Name: CV-140 Light Escort
Description: A lesser brother of the CV-150,it suppliments the CV-150 in dealing with pirates.


Name: Slegehorf Class Light Cruiser
Description: This ship is a proof of concept of Exposed External Emission Engine (EEEE or 4E).This gives the ship good speed,but it lacks in weapons and armor.


Name: Serak-II Class Battleship
Description: Now with a full-fledged 'Saucer Section' ,this ship now boldly goes where no one has gone before!


Name: Akizi Class Destroyer
Description: This ship is designed to work as a lone wolf or as escort to larger ships.Carries heavy firepower for a destoryer class ship.


Name: Serak-II Class Battleship Special - Enterprise-E Recreation (Prototype)
Description: Space: the final frontier. These are the voyages of the starship Enterprise. Its continuing mission: to explore strange new worlds, to seek out new life and new civilizations, to boldly go where no one has gone before.


Name: Slargonite Class Battleship
Description: Combining a flux discharge weapon at it's bow section,this ship can handle almost any foe in combat and emerge unharmed.It's excessively large target profile,paire with it's slow speed may drasticly hinder deployment.But anyone that can successfully field one such ship can safety assume victory is on his/her/it's side.One such ship is bought by an unknown individual whose most striking feature is a black helmet.


Name: Gizon Bio-Ship
Description: A bold design made by dunking a metal framework into a bio-solution bought from an obscure biological research company which went by the name of 'Umbrella'.The result is a space-faring lifeform that can withstand some damage,attack with melee attacks and able to think with high intelligence.An ineresting point to note is that the forementioned bio-solution had an old label which read :'Plagas' but no one could made any sense out of it.


We wish you to give us some opinions!
Thank you!


Edit:Takov and 'Enterprise' fixed

[Darkship]

some of these ships have fairly interesting designs and with further development can look really sweet, however , you have to mind your parenting, particularly with the Takov cruiser and the Serak Battleship both of which appear to have a lot their sections linked to the core, not good, bad, a must change.

A suggestion is to parent adjacent sections to each other and to make it logical.

So just mind those mistakes.

[Gkug]

they're some pretty good ships, with good designs although i think the Pacifica Class Cruise Liner is abit small for being a cruise liner.

[Pyper]

Maybe it's a typo, or maybe it's intentional, but your cruise liner and your support ship have ten times the amount of hit points as your combat ships. A 4-section cruiseliner with 55,000 hit points is pretty darn tough!

[Droid]

If they can incorporate that kind of armor onto a noncombatant vessel, why the fuck don't they put it on their combat vessels?

That makes no sense.

The ships are...meh. Not much to comment on.

[DoubleThink]

The ships aren't too bad, you've done well compared to others on the forums. I think everyone who ever played BSF has made your "Galactic Roadster" at some point, and the Pacifica Cruise liner is just atrocious. As for the others, there's some repetition, and it drags the ship down, but you're doing well overall.

Keep working on your shipbuilding, and you'll do well.

WHAT MISTAKE?

[BlkRdgPharmPRSTAFF]

The descriptions are nice, but not particularly detailed nor all that interesting, quite frankly. Also that Pacifica cruise liner (DT They're not in military service...) is as DoubleThink said, quite terrible. It's a simple ship that looks like it took 2 seconds to make, nor is it aesthetically pleasing.

The "Galatic" Roadster could use some work, after all, it's a 3 piece ship, nor is it particularly an eye pleasing one. The colors are quite frankly lacking in well, color shading, and the aegis on the Serak Class should probably be a different color then white. Also section 26 is a very ugly section. While you use it well, it shouldn't be something you use commonly, and don't forget to fix some of that messy parenting.

Aside from those criticisms, I think you did quite well for a new comer. However I DO NOT suggest for most people to post their first ship maker creations. At least without refinement. No good comes of that.

[T-002]

Hmm... well, I wouldn't say there is anything too wrong with the ships (most of them, anyway), but personally, I just don't like them. Not exactly my style. You do have potential though, just make sure you use it.

Also that Pacifica cruise liner (DT They're not in military service...) is as DoubleThink said, quite terrible. It's a simple ship that looks like it took 2 seconds to make, nor is it aesthetically pleasing.

The backstory makes up for it. It so totally does.

[BlkRdgPharmPRSTAFF]

Hmm... well, I wouldn't say there is anything too wrong with the ships (most of them, anyway), but personally, I just don't like them. Not exactly my style. You do have potential though, just make sure you use it.

Also that Pacifica cruise liner (DT They're not in military service...) is as DoubleThink said, quite terrible. It's a simple ship that looks like it took 2 seconds to make, nor is it aesthetically pleasing.

The backstory makes up for it. It so totally does.

Sorry but you can't speed boat away from a spaceship.

[xphoenix87]

For a first ship, the Serak Class Battleship is very nice. It doesn't do anything particularly groundbreaking, but it doesn't have the obvious errors that many early shipmakers make. The Takov is fairly nice too. Everything else is pretty plain.

[AutoHummer]

The Pacifica Class Liners are being recalled and are now undergoing extensive refits.

Also,the 'Enterprise' Class are being sent upgrade instructions for their 'Bussard Ramscoops' ,maximum capicity is increased by 150%

(Look at edited first post.)

And actually,you can speedboat away from a spaceship,just try!(of course,the speedboat must be spaceworthy ,but it's common sense,right?)

[DoubleThink]

And actually,you can speedboat away from a spaceship,just try!(of course,the speedboat must be spaceworthy ,but it's common sense,right?)

Propellors don't work so well in space, whether the ship or not is spaceworthy, FYI.

And cool, you're actually listening to advice. Best way to learn is to listen. You get points in my book.

[BlkRdgPharmPRSTAFF]

The Pacifica Class Liners are being recalled and are now undergoing extensive refits.

Also,the 'Enterprise' Class are being sent upgrade instructions for their 'Bussard Ramscoops' ,maximum capicity is increased by 150%

(Look at edited first post.)

And actually,you can speedboat away from a spaceship,just try!(of course,the speedboat must be spaceworthy ,but it's common sense,right?)

Listening to advice is the best way not to be hated by everyone on the forums. The battleship is nicer without the white, and the Pacifica class cruise liner is much better. The part with that thin section breaks the more flowing lines of the rest of the ship though, so I might pad that a little with a couple sections to add to the curves.

[AutoHummer]

And actually,you can speedboat away from a spaceship,just try!(of course,the speedboat must be spaceworthy ,but it's common sense,right?)

Propellors don't work so well in space, whether the ship or not is spaceworthy, FYI.

And cool, you're actually listening to advice. Best way to learn is to listen. You get points in my book.

Hmmmm....by spaceworthy I meant it can survive and navigate in the conditions of space.

(I was asking for advice,so why should I not take them?)

Pacifica Class orders now comes with extra,detachable passenger modules!So buy one today!

New refits for CV-15RX class,refits will be done for FREE in any INTERTECH shipyards!

2 new ships are rolling off the docks.

[DoubleThink]

(I was asking for advice,so why should I not take them?)

Let's not argue about how you're not a faggoty noob. I think we can both agree to agree here.

The new Pacifica is much better, but the 21s on the end are a bit iffy.