My newest and best ship yet!

Tsakara · Post by **Tsakara** » Tue Jan 22, 2008 11:45 pm

all those guns can and will be easily snipped off the ship. you need some guns inside.

Saint Jamez911 · Post by **Saint Jamez911** » Tue Jan 22, 2008 11:52 pm

Heres a conparisoin to a friends hive ship.

Tsakara · Post by **Tsakara** » Tue Jan 22, 2008 11:59 pm

his front is right, your tail is right.

smash them, together and color them pale purple and silver

Auriak · Post by **Auriak** » Wed Jan 23, 2008 1:07 am

The back should be more or less straight, with a bump in the middle, instaed of a bump with a bump in the middle. Also, the wings should be further back and more straight. But apart from that good job.

ChaosTheory · Post by **ChaosTheory** » Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:32 am

Did nobody else notice the screwy parenting . . . ?

Not to mention some major mirroring errors (front, the sections near and including the Nano's) and part mirror/copy problems (note the square and bar pieces behind the core). Other than that, it could look more organic, with smoother curves and a layering effect to give it depth.

The rear end looks kind of semi-nice, though.

JaffaJoke91 · Post by **JaffaJoke91** » Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:37 am

here is the altered version i made using your advice

Saint Jamez911 · Post by **Saint Jamez911** » Wed Jan 23, 2008 8:01 am

Jaffa your core is in the fornt again... lol.

DavidBeoulve · Post by **DavidBeoulve** » Wed Jan 23, 2008 8:01 am

Wow, I really love the progression I saw here. Good stuff - the first ship was another "Well, its father loves it." But then it got worlds better, then you added more curves and it was even better... and at the end, I want a copy.

Good stuff.

Saint Jamez911 · Post by **Saint Jamez911** » Wed Jan 23, 2008 8:05 am

i think ima work out some of the mirroring errors listed above, and give it a new colore, the pink and purple isnt working for me... The pink is just to well... pink, lol. ill update you on my progress

Saint Jamez911 · Post by **Saint Jamez911** » Wed Jan 23, 2008 8:23 am

ok heres my new changes so far, i will exstande the front of the hull a lil more then it is.

ChaosTheory · Post by **ChaosTheory** » Wed Jan 23, 2008 8:48 am

You didn't fix any of the errors . . .

Saint Jamez911 · Post by **Saint Jamez911** » Wed Jan 23, 2008 8:56 am

i tested it in game and i was working fine, so the mirroring was a little bit off. but thats no reason to redo it.

Tsakara · Post by **Tsakara** » Wed Jan 23, 2008 9:02 am

except that if certain areas are destroyed they'll leave floating pieces

Saint Jamez911 · Post by **Saint Jamez911** » Wed Jan 23, 2008 9:19 am

Again, tested in game and i didnt have a problem.

Cerebrus · Post by **Cerebrus** » Wed Jan 23, 2008 9:24 am

I can see some significant parenting issues. Maybe you should do some more testing.

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