The NSF

mato9020 · **Joined:** Thu Aug 18, 2011 10:42 pm **Posts:** 67

this is my fleet not much but im making more im open to critcism but not too bad please

Kiltric · **Joined:** Sat Apr 11, 2009 4:44 am **Posts:** 490

The first two are halfway decent. The main thing with them is the mixing of stock sections with SW ones. This includes having the core showing. When using SW sprites, this doesn't look good.
The shapes are interesting, and despite some section repetition, put together relatively well.

The third... All I'll say is don't mix the bio sprites with anything else. It never looks good.

mato9020 · **Joined:** Thu Aug 18, 2011 10:42 pm **Posts:** 67

the cyborg has hidden weapons but ill make some more
and ill fix my first two

mato9020 · **Joined:** Thu Aug 18, 2011 10:42 pm **Posts:** 67

hey guys this is the download for the ships i removd the cyborg and added a bettlestationhttp://www.mediafire.com/?6t4k6bad5k6w1

Arcalane · **Posted:** Wed Aug 31, 2011 12:07 pm

Kiltric wrote:

The third... All I'll say is don't mix the bio sprites with anything else. It never looks good.

Depends. The zergish ones? SWS made some pretty good cyborgish ships a while back, IIRC. But you have to be really good to pull that sort of thing off.

mato9020 · **Joined:** Thu Aug 18, 2011 10:42 pm **Posts:** 67

the battlestation is just supposed to look cool it dosent do much damage i havent really figured out the health thing for sections... but if i could get it to transform it would and could look amazing

Wakerz · **Posted:** Fri Sep 02, 2011 4:56 am

these are pretty good but hide your core or get the meta beta those mesh in pretty well, and as far as an organic/mechanical stuff goes tyrannids fuse that pretty well especially in captured ships

mato9020 · **Joined:** Thu Aug 18, 2011 10:42 pm **Posts:** 67

yeah i added peices so it doesn't show the core

jwa8402 · **Joined:** Tue Feb 26, 2008 9:09 am **Posts:** 1938

With regards to the station, A decent start but the vertical arms either need more detail around the tips where you put the runway type sections, or just make the arms the same. Asymmetrical is usually better if you can pull it off though. If you want good defensive coverage you might consider having the two sets of arms rotate counterclockwise to eachother. Personally I never cared for those huge square sections except as companion cubes so I'd try replacing those, but if not its not terrible. The rest of the fleet looks good, though I'm not liking the front of the first ship at all. Nor the combination of Shiny and the super detailed sections, though its hard to notice at first. Keep trying with the cyborg thing, but one idea would be to shade the normal sections to match the dark cyborg sections.

mato9020 · **Joined:** Thu Aug 18, 2011 10:42 pm **Posts:** 67

kk thanks for the advice ill work on the front of the first ship there all work in progresses so your advice is greatly thanked

JohnWildkins · **Joined:** Wed Aug 31, 2011 11:16 am **Posts:** 11

Alright. They look pretty good, except for your third ship. I'll leave the whole 'blending' issue aside to people who know what they're talking about, but my main problem with it is the blackness in the shield. That might be with the shield, I don't know, never used them, but it just makes the ship that already wasn't that great look even worse

Other than that, can't really think of anything.

WYRDYSM GAMES

The NSF

Who is online