WYRDYSM GAMES

Although this is nothing like SWS's ship i came up with the idea when i saw it not sure about the colour anything else crap about it?

sorry i can't believe i wrote ray gun meant rail gun.

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"I put no stock in religion. By the word religion I have seen the lunacy of fanatics of every denomination be called the will of god. I have seen too much religion in the eyes of too many murderers. Holiness is in right action, and courage on behalf of those who cannot defend themselves, and goodness. " Kingdom of heaven.

You need to use different shades of orange for the wings, to give the wings more depth. It also looks like some of the sections are misaligned. Finally, the two thrusters look a bit out of place, or look too small, or something

Apart from that, its a good start for a ship

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Those that live by the sword... get shot by those that don't.

this any better?

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"I put no stock in religion. By the word religion I have seen the lunacy of fanatics of every denomination be called the will of god. I have seen too much religion in the eyes of too many murderers. Holiness is in right action, and courage on behalf of those who cannot defend themselves, and goodness. " Kingdom of heaven.

You're on the right track, but the diferent shades you're using at the moment contrast a bit too much. You could probaly lighten the sections you'vre just darkened a bit, and also tone down the light grey as well

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Those that live by the sword... get shot by those that don't.

Those exhaust sprites could use some Additive Blending. Also, one of the Syn_sec11-sw (the one I attached a pic of) on each side isn't lined up straight with its partner. If that's intentional then disregard that comment. From what I can see of the innards, they're a jumbled mess.

Honestly I just don't like the ship. The engines appeared tacked on, and something about the two big squarish pieces of it bothers me. Before you try emulating SWS's building style, you should learn how to build good looking ships first.

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The walls have eyes: the shadows we throw are the shadows we try to throw off.

i would like to make this very clear i am in no way trying to emulate SWS's style, i was simply inspired by the idea and wanted to give SWS credit for that, however i agree with alot of the criticism here and will post an improved version of this ship shortly.

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"I put no stock in religion. By the word religion I have seen the lunacy of fanatics of every denomination be called the will of god. I have seen too much religion in the eyes of too many murderers. Holiness is in right action, and courage on behalf of those who cannot defend themselves, and goodness. " Kingdom of heaven.

i basically completely redid the whole ship and came up with this. There is also a smaller version which can be found i my other post.

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"I put no stock in religion. By the word religion I have seen the lunacy of fanatics of every denomination be called the will of god. I have seen too much religion in the eyes of too many murderers. Holiness is in right action, and courage on behalf of those who cannot defend themselves, and goodness. " Kingdom of heaven.

And now it is too dark.

i fear my monitor brightness may be set differently as the dark blue on that ship is just before navy blue however i will correct this.

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"I put no stock in religion. By the word religion I have seen the lunacy of fanatics of every denomination be called the will of god. I have seen too much religion in the eyes of too many murderers. Holiness is in right action, and courage on behalf of those who cannot defend themselves, and goodness. " Kingdom of heaven.

On my opinion this looks better than the dark version, you can try to change the colors on a scale of celestial blue, I guess that that will look great, but you can try colors such as yellow (dark, otherwise it will be a eye burner) or light brown, etc.

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