New ship inspired by Anna's innards ship
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New ship inspired by Anna's innards ship
Although this is nothing like Anna's ship i came up with the idea when i saw it not sure about the colour anything else crap about it?
sorry i can't believe i wrote ray gun meant rail gun.
sorry i can't believe i wrote ray gun meant rail gun.
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a heavily armed ship using powerful beam technology and a new rail gun. the TTW-7 tough armor plating but there are weak spots where weapons have been mounted to counter this the ship is fast fot its size to avoid capital ships heavy weaponry. - SMscreen031.png (81.56 KiB) Viewed 4791 times
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Re: New ship inspired by Anna's innards ship
You need to use different shades of orange for the wings, to give the wings more depth. It also looks like some of the sections are misaligned. Finally, the two thrusters look a bit out of place, or look too small, or something
Apart from that, its a good start for a ship
Apart from that, its a good start for a ship
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Re: New ship inspired by Anna's innards ship
this any better?
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Re: New ship inspired by Anna's innards ship
You're on the right track, but the diferent shades you're using at the moment contrast a bit too much. You could probaly lighten the sections you'vre just darkened a bit, and also tone down the light grey as well
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Those exhaust sprites could use some Additive Blending. Also, one of the Syn_sec11-sw (the one I attached a pic of) on each side isn't lined up straight with its partner. If that's intentional then disregard that comment. From what I can see of the innards, they're a jumbled mess.
Honestly I just don't like the ship. The engines appeared tacked on, and something about the two big squarish pieces of it bothers me. Before you try emulating Anna's building style, you should learn how to build good looking ships first.
Honestly I just don't like the ship. The engines appeared tacked on, and something about the two big squarish pieces of it bothers me. Before you try emulating Anna's building style, you should learn how to build good looking ships first.
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i would like to make this very clear i am in no way trying to emulate Anna's style, i was simply inspired by the idea and wanted to give Anna credit for that, however i agree with alot of the criticism here and will post an improved version of this ship shortly.AidanAdv wrote: Before you try emulating Anna's building style,
"I put no stock in religion. By the word religion I have seen the lunacy of fanatics of every denomination be called the will of god. I have seen too much religion in the eyes of too many murderers. Holiness is in right action, and courage on behalf of those who cannot defend themselves, and goodness. " Kingdom of heaven.
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i basically completely redid the whole ship and came up with this. There is also a smaller version which can be found i my other post.
"I put no stock in religion. By the word religion I have seen the lunacy of fanatics of every denomination be called the will of god. I have seen too much religion in the eyes of too many murderers. Holiness is in right action, and courage on behalf of those who cannot defend themselves, and goodness. " Kingdom of heaven.
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And now it is too dark.
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i fear my monitor brightness may be set differently as the dark blue on that ship is just before navy blue however i will correct this.
"I put no stock in religion. By the word religion I have seen the lunacy of fanatics of every denomination be called the will of god. I have seen too much religion in the eyes of too many murderers. Holiness is in right action, and courage on behalf of those who cannot defend themselves, and goodness. " Kingdom of heaven.
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On my opinion this looks better than the dark version, you can try to change the colors on a scale of celestial blue, I guess that that will look great, but you can try colors such as yellow (dark, otherwise it will be a eye burner) or light brown, etc.