IXO, LWA and for the moment the AAE- Please comment
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IXO, LWA and for the moment the AAE- Please comment
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IXO Database
Welcome Commander. You gave now been granted to access certain privileged information of our esteemed organisation most specifically the specific capabilities of our ships.
History
IXO or Independent Xlyian Organisation is a powerful presence in the Core of the Milky Way Galaxy holding the key to extreme speed FTL drives (x5 faster than light is the highest reached by any other being in the galaxy and as I’m sure you know we possess up to x7 officially). Using this advantage we are well established as technical geniuses and are jealously looked at by competitors.
The IXO was established in 2136 GY; 10 years before the Terrans left Earth, a small but highly profitable technical engineer’s company formed it when he saw an opportunity to expand into spaceflight by developing engines for the Xylian Navy. He proved to be successful and so the Organisation’s presence spread and eventually becoming the sole survivor of the Corinth War that completely obliterated Xylia turning IXO into a nomadic corporation whose only stopping places were those abundant in resources.
Emperor Class Dreadnought Mk3
Duke Class Frigate Mk5
Queen Class Battlecruiser Mk1
King Class Cruiser Mk2
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IXO Database
Welcome Commander. You gave now been granted to access certain privileged information of our esteemed organisation most specifically the specific capabilities of our ships.
History
IXO or Independent Xlyian Organisation is a powerful presence in the Core of the Milky Way Galaxy holding the key to extreme speed FTL drives (x5 faster than light is the highest reached by any other being in the galaxy and as I’m sure you know we possess up to x7 officially). Using this advantage we are well established as technical geniuses and are jealously looked at by competitors.
The IXO was established in 2136 GY; 10 years before the Terrans left Earth, a small but highly profitable technical engineer’s company formed it when he saw an opportunity to expand into spaceflight by developing engines for the Xylian Navy. He proved to be successful and so the Organisation’s presence spread and eventually becoming the sole survivor of the Corinth War that completely obliterated Xylia turning IXO into a nomadic corporation whose only stopping places were those abundant in resources.
Emperor Class Dreadnought Mk3
Duke Class Frigate Mk5
Queen Class Battlecruiser Mk1
King Class Cruiser Mk2
More to come……………………
Last edited by Wolfbrother on Thu Jun 19, 2008 1:13 am, edited 4 times in total.
Is that your first ship?
The only thing I dislike about it is the repitition of the section 26s in the back.
Of course you probably want to get somebody else's opinion before doing anything to it as I'm definitely not the most experienced ship builder on the forum.
The only thing I dislike about it is the repitition of the section 26s in the back.
Of course you probably want to get somebody else's opinion before doing anything to it as I'm definitely not the most experienced ship builder on the forum.
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I actually liked that, but I dislike the white 23's in the back. Very good colorscheme and weapon placement.Ai_512 wrote:Is that your first ship?
The only thing I dislike about it is the repitition of the section 26s in the back.
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Sorry for the triple post but with very little replies I thought I'd post my first station.
Thor Class Station Mk1
Thor Class Station Mk1
Last edited by Wolfbrother on Mon Jun 16, 2008 6:20 am, edited 1 time in total.
I don't really like the station, but it's a cool idea. As for the ships, they're quite good. One question though, are you just using the same ship and adding on to it, or, in the case of the small ship, taking away from it? If so, you should probably make a new hull, simply to make the ships look less similar.
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Pretty basic designs, but they are good for the most part. The front of the ships are good although I think the backs could use some work. I like ship #3 though you seem to have some very interesting parenting. Are you sure there's no floating pieces?
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very what i would call mature designs. Theres not a lot of random stuff sticking out, no repetition though I agree about the back of the first one...
conservative weapons usage though perhaps too many deflectors for a ship that size.
I kinda like the station just cuz its different but it mainly looks disjointed. If your trying to do a station with WSKRS or defensive satalites or something, a back story would help as well as making their placement less symmetrical around the station. If their suppose to be part of the station, some sort of tether might be in order.
conservative weapons usage though perhaps too many deflectors for a ship that size.
I kinda like the station just cuz its different but it mainly looks disjointed. If your trying to do a station with WSKRS or defensive satalites or something, a back story would help as well as making their placement less symmetrical around the station. If their suppose to be part of the station, some sort of tether might be in order.
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Emperor Class Dreadnought Mk4
Restyled the engines on the first ship.
Also there is a reason for the station's defensive sattelites just got to get round to writing into the fluff for the fleet.
The basic idea behind this fleet is that it's a highly advanced trading organisation much the same as the Hansa in Kevin J Anderson's Saga of the Seven Suns but the IXO have a few differences and are also not human. They are part of a series of fleets under development by me and my friend but so far only ships have been made for the IXO and Arc Angel Confedracy/Empire.
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