The Dragon's Forge

[omega]

These are updated pics.

竜の件　,Ryu no Ken, the dragon's dagger

竜の　かたな , Ryu no Katana, the dragon's sword



http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/4554/smscreen05.png (old)

[Homer]

WAY to much antennas there :x ! also the back needs work. OK about the wings they look like absolute crap thin down the back and make like a naccel thing. the front I like though.

[abortedfetus]

if you change the angle of the wings you could use them as weapon platforms...maybe make them retract into the main hull of the ship too... that'd be pretty cool... just an idea

[omega]

Removed the antennas. I also modded the wing.

[Vincent Von Wolfe II]

Both versions of the ship are incredibly awesome, but I honestly liked the first one more.

[Arcalane]

Both versions of the ship are incredibly awesome, but I honestly liked the first one more.

Okay look buddy, stop fucking necro'ing, read your PMs, and for fuck's sake read post dates. If it wasn't for the fact you are on day two, you would be permanently BANNED already.

Now, I suggest you post your ships and shut the hell up until you earn some respect from people here. This is not up for debate.

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omega; since you're so intent on copying Eri, I suggest you talk with him for advice. The ship is better without the coating of superfluous antennae, I'll give it that much.

[omega]

Wow. That's an epic number of necros.

I believe I removed the antennae. And is Eri a he or a she?

[maarten]

Wow. That's an epic number of necros.

I believe I removed the antennae. And is Eri a he or a she?

Eri is a he.

About the ship: the anennae less version looks cool. But the wings just seem so... ehm... strait?
Anyways the ship looks cool and the engie glows are a nice addition.

[omega]

Bump.

New ship. The Ryu no Katana (dragon's sword).

[jwa8402]

I personally dislike the practice of tacking on additional sections to a previous design and calling it a new ship, but that said I genuinely do like it. The wing tips look like they should rotate forward klingon style, least in battle, with smaller battle blades popping out. Not so much a fan of the section usage along the spine of the ship but I very much like the engine.

[Xynus]

katana? i think you should have actually made it like a katana instead of a european sword.

[Sponge]

Tear off those scrawny, little wings. They look strange and make absolutely no real-world sense. I know that's not exactly the goal, but come on. Wings in space are dumb, and if they're as thin and brittle as those, they'll be coming off posthaste.

Other than that, these ships aren't bad. A lot like Eri's style. I'd like to see something different.

[AlphaDetisMegas]

Tear off those scrawny, little wings. They look strange and make absolutely no real-world sense. I know that's not exactly the goal, but come on. Wings in space are dumb, and if they're as thin and brittle as those, they'll be coming off posthaste.

Seriously, think about it for a second, maybe those wings store ammo or are some sort of sensor array.

and besides, i like to think that everyone in BSF basically has their own ''universe'' and each one has different '' rules'' he probably put those wings there because they have some purpose.

[Sponge]

I would personally choose to store explosive ammunition in long, thin struts that protrude from the side of my ship's hull. Oh wait.

They're not only nonsensical, but they don't look good. They're in a different style than the rest of the ship, and they stick out like a sore thumb.

[omega]

These ships are suppose to look like swords, or at least similar. The wings are the guards of the sword. I plan to make the wings a bit thinner and shorter. Any better ideas?