5th, 6th and 7th ships but first fleet. Need comments.

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Post by th15 »

Colour scheme is a little haphazard. Perhaps try putting a few sections of a colour beside each other to form larger groups of colour rather than having every section a different colour.
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Choice of color is all right, placement of colors? Not so good, generally you use colors to define groups of sections, randomly coloring sections kinda defeats the purpose of it.
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Post by ArcaneDude »

It looks fairly fragile for it's size. Good colorwork, but as Iburn said, bad internal work. Try to use less shrinking and stretching, and a more restricted selection of sections. Don't make it repetitive, though.
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