5th, 6th and 7th ships but first fleet. Need comments.
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Choice of color is all right, placement of colors? Not so good, generally you use colors to define groups of sections, randomly coloring sections kinda defeats the purpose of it.
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It looks fairly fragile for it's size. Good colorwork, but as Iburn said, bad internal work. Try to use less shrinking and stretching, and a more restricted selection of sections. Don't make it repetitive, though.
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