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Whoops, miscounted the zeroes. Point still stands though.
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I'll help miram out on the backstory.
Let's stick with space enforcers
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A group of enforcers and bounty hunters. The iron force ships are built from reinforced steel making their ships slow but heavily armored. Their form of economy is the use of the bounty hunting system and are often hired to guard legal convoys.

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Yeah yeah I'm not good at histories too.
Anyway Cryo wanna making an history for me :3
Newest download of fleet:
Iron force beta test fleet.rar
(34.45 KiB) Downloaded 85 times
-This update coming with.
+Hull for ships because they was weak as hell (+400 for big ones)
+Some weapon configurations (not in stats in weapons sprites thanks to cryo for help)
-Still 100% balanced I'm need to be approved now.
This depend of DTFU game masters.
the ships still don't have name because I'm wanna put name after I'm get approved back
I'm left the decision in hands of Wtfu or idk the new name.
and I'm don't play minecraft
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New, ship I'm working on!.
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Need Suggestions
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Flip the core behind itself. Give it curved wings. It will create interest from the others
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I know it's been said before but, I want to see you make a ship that doesn't include that prosectionax sprite for a core. Break the mould, try something new! :D
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I really like the overall Iron Force Idea, your ships have a nice cohesive style and are actually pretty good (completely drop-dead gorgeous compared to my space turds) plus I can see that your ship building skills are definately improving.

The only advice I could give you, is to spread out your ships a little more, as that is what everyone else does. I would suggest taking the side parts of the core (not the wings) and spacing them out from the center a bit. (note if you don't wanna do that I am certainly not a professional so it is entirely okay to disregard my advice entirely) For minor details, rotate some of the turrets around and add doodad and glows. (The pros reeeeeeeaaaaaaallllly like doodads and glows) Oh and add highlights using low alpha fraxies. Again I am sure as hell not a professional but I read up on everything and have seen quite a few ships so this is simply what I have seen and what I am trying to implement myself. Have fun :D
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here
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idk if this is better for me its like an piece of shit.
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I meant copy it behind the original. It'll be bigger s so the ship can be different. Give the new one a different cover sprite though.
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Fuck the wings only cruisers + wanna have wings.
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Finished
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I like :D
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the only thing left is cryo he wanna making iron force back story
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I'm telling you that the name "Iron Force" is terrible. I'd stay with the "Judin Federation" or something of the like.
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The ships are looking slightly less homogenous than before, so I'll be grateful and not ask any more of you.
Doogie12 wrote:I'm telling you that the name "Iron Force" is terrible.
I have a much better name for it, actually.
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