Edit: new ships added C&C, i tried some color with the cannon. sunlight was an attempt at a blocky ship. I also tried some red doodads, I think that turned out well.
First two sw ships.
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First two sw ships.
Heeeey. Started using sprites. I have not made a ship for awhile, and am going to improve my skills one at a time. so C&C on my use of sections here.
Edit: new ships added C&C, i tried some color with the cannon. sunlight was an attempt at a blocky ship. I also tried some red doodads, I think that turned out well.
Edit: new ships added C&C, i tried some color with the cannon. sunlight was an attempt at a blocky ship. I also tried some red doodads, I think that turned out well.
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- Cannon. Artillery ship. Battleship class.
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- Sunlight. Support frigate.
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- Ice. fleet penetration role. Battleship class.
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- Duststorm. Small support gunship
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Last edited by LongcatX on Wed Feb 16, 2011 8:41 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: First two sw ships.
The Ice is decent, with no glaring mistakes, though it does feel a tad like a Y-Wing rip-off. It's just a bit bland.
The Duststorm is similarly decent and bland.
I think your ships need a little more life and flair, not necessarily a lot, mind you, but something that makes them nice to look at.
The Duststorm is similarly decent and bland.
I think your ships need a little more life and flair, not necessarily a lot, mind you, but something that makes them nice to look at.
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Re: First two sw ships.
Kiltric wrote:The Ice is decent, with no glaring mistakes, though it does feel a tad like a Y-Wing rip-off. It's just a bit bland.
The Duststorm is similarly decent and bland.
I think your ships need a little more life and flair, not necessarily a lot, mind you, but something that makes them nice to look at.
okay. thank you, that should help me.
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Re: First two sw ships.
I agree with Kiltric, they look nice, but are boring 
I would say color, but then again, it's your call.
I would say color, but then again, it's your call.
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Re: First two sw ships.
yeah, some color would be nice...any chance I could get a detail sprite pack?cubby989 wrote:I agree with Kiltric, they look nice, but are boring
I would say color, but then again, it's your call.
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Re: First two sw ships.
The Cannon is hands down the best ship you've ever made. Good work on that. My only nitpick is it looks like the two cannon wings look like they're above the rest of the ship. Darken them or lighten up the center.
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Re: First two sw ships.
gracias! that is all.Doogie12 wrote:The Cannon is hands down the best ship you've ever made. Good work on that. My only nitpick is it looks like the two cannon wings look like they're above the rest of the ship. Darken them or lighten up the center.
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