Right. Posted these on IRC, need to know if there's anything particularly wrong with it.
So, people. Comments? Good, or bad?
This is how it started. Well no, it started with just a green core. But this what when I decided I was "done" with this ship and nailed the style out!
And here's a penisbrick variant just because I thought it looked better that way.
Aaaaaand a smaller escort ship.
Sitting around tossing shit together atm, might update in a couple of hours who knows. \o/
Building Ships, need C&C
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Building Ships, need C&C
Fly me to the moon, so I can play among the stars~
Let me see what spring is like on Jupiter and Mars~
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Re: Building Ships, need C&C
Is there any way to make the second one transform into the first one?
Re: Building Ships, need C&C
Gorgeous style. The P-brick basically sums up all the good bits I like on the first one, and the turrets on the first one are lovely. Escort looks nice and aggressive. Only criticism is the piece cutting the front end of the larger ships in half, it matches up with the piece in front of it perfectly, but behind it the straight line doesn't look good.
"Damn hippies with their slippers and mesh bags looking for "adventure" or friggin' nerds who hasn't held anything but a microscope in their girly little hands. Such posers don't last long here." - Wolf (S.T.A.L.K.E.R.)
Re: Building Ships, need C&C
These ships are great. The color fits the designs well.
One ridiculously minor nitpick I have is that the team stripes aren't all perfectly aligned with the sections =\.
However, I don't like the space between the engines in ship #1 and #2, especially since the two engines look, well connected. I suggest you either fill that space with something or move those two engines slightly farther apart.
One ridiculously minor nitpick I have is that the team stripes aren't all perfectly aligned with the sections =\.
However, I don't like the space between the engines in ship #1 and #2, especially since the two engines look, well connected. I suggest you either fill that space with something or move those two engines slightly farther apart.
Re: Building Ships, need C&C
Alright, after a minor(lol) hiatus I am back to shipbuilding.
I've taken the things commented on into consideration for further shipbuilding and I get the feeling I've improved a bit.
Regardless, here's my latest endeavour.
I've taken the things commented on into consideration for further shipbuilding and I get the feeling I've improved a bit.
Regardless, here's my latest endeavour.
Fly me to the moon, so I can play among the stars~
Let me see what spring is like on Jupiter and Mars~
Let me see what spring is like on Jupiter and Mars~
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Re: Building Ships, need C&C
That is one sexy beast of a ship, I honestly see no where you can improve that one
Re: Building Ships, need C&C
Well personally I thought this was sort of an improvement.
But maybe that's just me.
But maybe that's just me.
Fly me to the moon, so I can play among the stars~
Let me see what spring is like on Jupiter and Mars~
Let me see what spring is like on Jupiter and Mars~
Re: Building Ships, need C&C
Definitely an improvement, it also makes not feel like a plagiarist since I'm working on a manta shaped ship....
The shading on the nose seems a little confusing, but that's just how the parts are I guess.
The shading on the nose seems a little confusing, but that's just how the parts are I guess.
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