Union Royal Fleet(URF)

[Snopel]

Union Royal Fleet(URF)
The Union started off as a peaceful trading company, but having so many trade routes attracted many pirates and other sides. After countless attacks and losing many cargo ships Union used their money they had earned to modernize their cargo ships into warships.
URF Vengence
The Vengence is the first actual Union warship to come out of the Union shipyards.

URF Atlas
The Atlas is a large cargo ship turned into a Dreadnaught by equipping weapons onto it.

URF Plato
The Plato is a small scout ship normally tasked to defend the larger ships from pirates.

URF Dauntless
The Dauntless is used as a spearhead in attacks as it's hull is reinforced with extra plating.


Will be adding more ships soon and i know that the plato's wing is red(need to fix that)
youtube video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f_VDt90hts8

[Anna]

Some things become immediately obvious. You're not taking screenshots at default zoom, something that you'd know is generally expected when you post screenshots if you'd lurked even briefly. Second most obvious thing is that you have no idea how to shade or what the purpose of it is, and you're just throwing in dark and light shaded sections essentially at random. Third most obvious thing is that you should stay away from colours, because you over-saturate them.

Oh, and your ships are jumbled incoherent messes with no clear structuring. Just a bunch of sections slapped together to get a vague external shape, with no attention paid to internal flow, consistancy or detail.

[Snopel]

Ok ya i forgot to take the screenshots better and i'll try to make my other ones better.

[Anna]

Just for future reference, is English your native language?

[Snopel]

yes it is and i know it doesn't seem like it but i normally don't check my spelling and my punctuation that much.

[Anna]

Or at all.

Well get used to doing so when making posts on the forum. I will only tolerate incorrect spelling and grammar from non-native speakers. If it's that hard, get a spellchecker. Otherwise, oppression will ensue.

Yes, I know I'm an awful person.

The latest ship is an improvement. The brighter red bits could use with having the saturation toned down a bit, and adding some grey details would probably help, but it's... better. It's still not at default zoom, though. Press "Home" before taking your screenshots and make sure the Shipmaker window is not maximised.

[Snopel]

OK i'll try.