SC( star collation) fleet

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decent?

yeah.
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um way better.
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SC( star collation) fleet

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ok, so here is my brand new fleet. don't bug me about getting sprites, i know i can . but i like the flat style better for some reason :roll: . so crit please! :)

still some more stations to add though...
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I honestly realy don't like them JUST my opinion But The 4th one down seems nice Instead of a Squarish Front Try to use Triangular?
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For the most part they are either too blocky or too random. The third to last is at least not a block, and the last shows a fair amount of potential to be developed. Personally I'd forget about the rest and focus on making that one awesome cuz it could be made to fit in with the stock fleet quite nicely. I'd narrow the middle slightly though.
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thx jwa, really no more posts :cry:
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your designs are actually kind of interesting from the "ppc" down, however your coloring isn't, too much saturation on the dark blue (thats what kills it for me). Also watch out for depthing issues (not literally depthing section over section, but the idea that sections that are meant to appear lower are darker in color).
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Icy wrote:your designs are actually kind of interesting from the "ppc" down, however your coloring isn't, too much saturation on the dark blue (thats what kills it for me). Also watch out for depthing issues (not literally depthing section over section, but the idea that sections that are meant to appear lower are darker in color).
thx, guess im just lazy. do you know a fast way to do it?
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update! free cookies for everyone :D

ok so a new ship and station, a fighter and a shipyard to be exact

crit please, also note that these were made before the few posts i got... :wink:
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It's easiest to mod the preset colours before you start building, ie. a set of greys in ascending brightness, a couple of blues. I can't remember who said it, but using a colour wheel also will help in choosing a colour scheme. The SRSF seems to have a small mirroring flaw, some sections just don't mirror well unfortunately. If I'm unsure I use the x,y coords in the edit tab to doublecheck.
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Son Tzu wrote:It's easiest to mod the preset colours before you start building, ie. a set of greys in ascending brightness, a couple of blues. I can't remember who said it, but using a colour wheel also will help in choosing a colour scheme. The SRSF seems to have a small mirroring flaw, some sections just don't mirror well unfortunately. If I'm unsure I use the x,y coords in the edit tab to doublecheck.
ok , ill try that . the srsf(short ranged strike fighter) was remade about 3 times. because ive either hit the wrong button on an error , or was accidentaly saved over. but don't worry ill fix it :wink:
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Get some SWA's. :| You need them, your building skills are alright but a lot of those ships are kinda rubishey :|

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Terry007abc wrote:Get some SWA's. :| You need them, your building skills are alright but a lot of those ships are kinda rubishey :|

Get these! :|
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thx ill use the flat for now just because i still think i can improve before i move to SWA, the sheilds i might but i kinda like the gratutious ones right now, and the SWA weapons won't fit, but when i get bored of flat ill switch ok? :)
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Australians, I don't know. Guess it comes from being upside down all the time :P
Going down the SWA route is fine, but to be honest you'll get better results from shn type sections. If anything, they're easier to use than stock because of the shading already on them. Just remember to turn down the colour saturation or they'll look like plastic instead of metal. Hmmm, plastic spaceships...
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