lionm12's shipyard
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lionm12's shipyard
Well I am back from my long vacation, here is a taste of what kind if ships i will be working in the future.
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Re: lionm12's shipyard
not bad, i really like the glows, but i think it needs more... shiplike shape, not just a triangle.
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I have tryd a new style, but in my opinion I think am better in TSA, so here it is!
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personally i think this is much better i love the detailing and colouring depthing is perfect, but it feels unfinished, it feels like a good core but now you need some larger armour panels to fill t out and give it a shape. Also the thruster at the back feels undersized for the size of the engine it feels leke their should be a large chunky thruster or it should be elongated. Other then that great work
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old one : boring
new one : interesting
Seriously take this new ship and work with it, there are alot of good features on it, that are damaged by some bad placement for some things like the rear engine like things. Overall though it looks sorta like a Warhammer 40K necron ship.
new one : interesting
Seriously take this new ship and work with it, there are alot of good features on it, that are damaged by some bad placement for some things like the rear engine like things. Overall though it looks sorta like a Warhammer 40K necron ship.
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yes this is alot better, i can't argue with it =Dlionm12 wrote:Here it is my UPGRADED version hope you like it !
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Re: lionm12's shipyard
Hnnngh this is a hard one.
You obviously know your way with those sections, and while elements of the ship look really good, they just don't fit together to form a please shape. Perhaps try expanding it to the front or to the back. I trust you could do it well.
You obviously know your way with those sections, and while elements of the ship look really good, they just don't fit together to form a please shape. Perhaps try expanding it to the front or to the back. I trust you could do it well.
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I like it, but have you tried making the current ship the inner workings of the ship and adding 'plating' around it? I think the effect would be quite nice...
Not sure how best to explain this...
Not sure how best to explain this...
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i think the gap in the middle needs to be filled, and again i don't like the horsemonster exhaust sprite their it doesn't look right, however i like the shape of it and the colouring is good,
i don't suppose i could be really cheeky and ask you to post the previous ship in the scrapheap so i can have a fiddle with it?
i don't suppose i could be really cheeky and ask you to post the previous ship in the scrapheap so i can have a fiddle with it?
"I put no stock in religion. By the word religion I have seen the lunacy of fanatics of every denomination be called the will of god. I have seen too much religion in the eyes of too many murderers. Holiness is in right action, and courage on behalf of those who cannot defend themselves, and goodness. " Kingdom of heaven.
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Of course Preacher, but I am on my laptop so when i get to the computer i try to upload it so you can download it .
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yes the middle is definitely missing something.
All I can suggest is a massive beam cannon of some kind, or something with lots of glowy lights and a bit of animation.
All I can suggest is a massive beam cannon of some kind, or something with lots of glowy lights and a bit of animation.