Hey people,this is my junkyard and ships i make will be here.Say how nice or ugly is the ship,good or bad is builded.
This is my new ship.
My Junkyard
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Re: My Junkyard
The colours are really off-putting. I'd change that first, prefably to just a grey, and then work from there
The gaps that I can see along the centre of the hull should be filled up, that should be done second
The shading also needs to change, but that doesn't really matter at the moment, with the crappy colour scheme. It's just something to keep in mind when you recolour the sections
The gaps that I can see along the centre of the hull should be filled up, that should be done second
The shading also needs to change, but that doesn't really matter at the moment, with the crappy colour scheme. It's just something to keep in mind when you recolour the sections
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Re: My Junkyard
The color scheme itself is fine IMO. The problem is that the colors haven't been used in a very effective way to make the ship interesting or show depth.
The ship is generally bland. I'd reconsider the shape of the gray section you have on your ship. The orange front looks like it's been glued onto a flat gray front even in thumbnail size.
The ship is generally bland. I'd reconsider the shape of the gray section you have on your ship. The orange front looks like it's been glued onto a flat gray front even in thumbnail size.
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Re: My Junkyard
Well i keep that in mind.
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Re: My Junkyard
It looks like a headless humanoid on its side
nice ship but it looks like its backwords
TNB
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nice ship but it looks like its backwords
TNB
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Re: My Junkyard
This looks decent. There is nothing blatantly bad about the section usage and layout. It does look a bit plain though. It would help a lot if you were to use different shades of gray to give a sense of dimension to the ship.
Also, it's more of a nitpick, but the solid line cutting through the center of your ship doesn't look great. I think the shading is the important thing to develop, but for future reference...
Also, it's more of a nitpick, but the solid line cutting through the center of your ship doesn't look great. I think the shading is the important thing to develop, but for future reference...
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Re: My Junkyard
I see jumble and clutter and no sense of what internal placement. Looks like my first ships, in which pieces were slapped on however you liked. Plan a bit more next time.
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If you can't get it right;
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Solare:
http://www.wyrdysm.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=4858
If you can't get it right;
Then off you go, but don't call quits;
Just go make custom sprites.
Solare:
http://www.wyrdysm.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=4858