Yeah. Basically, I needed a place to put my stories. As such, I've created a small website, called Industrial Horizons.
At the moment, it's just one story, with one chapter. I have three more chapters, and some more stories, but I'm very reluctant to post them all at once. Don't ask, I don't know why either.
Anyway, go, see, and read, and give me feedback, please. Also, don't hate on Freewebs. It's simple. I need simplicity.
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"The city is more ruined than before the bombardement."
Yeah...logic...sometimes it slips...
Very nice, although not entirely my style of story. Although I am surprised that you managed to write a story so short before the exam period...![Mr. Green :mrgreen:](./images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif)
Yeah...logic...sometimes it slips...
Very nice, although not entirely my style of story. Although I am surprised that you managed to write a story so short before the exam period...
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Damn, ninja logic. It slipped right past me.ArcaneDude wrote:"The city is more ruined than before the bombardement."
Yeah...logic...sometimes it slips...
Very nice, although not entirely my style of story. Although I am surprised that you managed to write a story so short before the exam period...
Also, I'm doing VWO, so no exams for me 8)
Note to all, by the way: News has been updated. Will be adding more chapters shortly.
EDIT: Wolfbrother, you ninja'd me. I get ninja'd alot... anyway, thank you for your comment. More is coming up.
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(first chapter)She glanced over_her shoulder.
Could be better.
Otherwise good stuff
Also, wheres the 2nd chapter: Links are there but the story isn't.
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upon reading this:
50% of people will have scrolled up
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upon reading this:
50% of people will have scrolled up
25% will have looked at their ceiling
The last 25% can now feel smug because everyone else has taken orders from a little sig box.
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Bump-double-post.
Chapters Two and Three are now up. Also, I might need somebody's assistance with another story I'm writing, because my mind is a mess and I need to borrow one from someone. It's more or less fantasy-ish, but like I said, a darker theme. Lots of demons and stuff.
So, read it and weep, I'd say.
Chapters Two and Three are now up. Also, I might need somebody's assistance with another story I'm writing, because my mind is a mess and I need to borrow one from someone. It's more or less fantasy-ish, but like I said, a darker theme. Lots of demons and stuff.
So, read it and weep, I'd say.
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It lives! It Liiiiiiives! Now I know what it feels like to be God!
Erm, yeah. Bumped this thread back from the realm of the dead.
Got a little prologue to a new story, temporarily named Project: 001. Please read, tell me what you think, maybe share an idea for a name.
Also, if you are very interested (which I sincerely doubt), I might have use for a co-writer.
So yeah. Read, dang it!
Also, seeing as this is my thread, and I have useful stuff in this post, I don't think this officially counts as a necro.
Erm, yeah. Bumped this thread back from the realm of the dead.
Got a little prologue to a new story, temporarily named Project: 001. Please read, tell me what you think, maybe share an idea for a name.
Also, if you are very interested (which I sincerely doubt), I might have use for a co-writer.
So yeah. Read, dang it!
Also, seeing as this is my thread, and I have useful stuff in this post, I don't think this officially counts as a necro.
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