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Yeah. Basically, I needed a place to put my stories. As such, I've created a small website, called Industrial Horizons.

At the moment, it's just one story, with one chapter. I have three more chapters, and some more stories, but I'm very reluctant to post them all at once. Don't ask, I don't know why either.

Anyway, go, see, and read, and give me feedback, please. Also, don't hate on Freewebs. It's simple. I need simplicity.
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Wow. 33 views, no replies whatsoever. You're looking, so you might take some time to reply.

Tell you what. By the end of the day, I will add two more chapters to Unit 323 and possibly a new story.

Just... for God's sake, don't keep quiet like this.
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Post by ArcaneDude »

"The city is more ruined than before the bombardement."

Yeah...logic...sometimes it slips...

Very nice, although not entirely my style of story. Although I am surprised that you managed to write a story so short before the exam period... :mrgreen:
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Post by Wolfbrother »

I like and I want more> You have given me a taste and I nee dthe rest> Just keep it coming.
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Post by T-002 »

ArcaneDude wrote:"The city is more ruined than before the bombardement."

Yeah...logic...sometimes it slips...

Very nice, although not entirely my style of story. Although I am surprised that you managed to write a story so short before the exam period... :mrgreen:
Damn, ninja logic. It slipped right past me.

Also, I'm doing VWO, so no exams for me 8)

Note to all, by the way: News has been updated. Will be adding more chapters shortly.

EDIT: Wolfbrother, you ninja'd me. I get ninja'd alot... anyway, thank you for your comment. More is coming up.
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Post by Da_Higg »

She glanced over_her shoulder.
(first chapter)
Could be better.

Otherwise good stuff

Also, wheres the 2nd chapter: Links are there but the story isn't.
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Yeah, noticed. I'll fix it when I get home (at school now), and I'll upload Chapter 3.
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Post by T-002 »

Bump-double-post.

Chapters Two and Three are now up. Also, I might need somebody's assistance with another story I'm writing, because my mind is a mess and I need to borrow one from someone. It's more or less fantasy-ish, but like I said, a darker theme. Lots of demons and stuff.

So, read it and weep, I'd say.
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Post by T-002 »

It lives! It Liiiiiiives! Now I know what it feels like to be God!

Erm, yeah. Bumped this thread back from the realm of the dead.

Got a little prologue to a new story, temporarily named Project: 001. Please read, tell me what you think, maybe share an idea for a name.

Also, if you are very interested (which I sincerely doubt), I might have use for a co-writer.

So yeah. Read, dang it!

Also, seeing as this is my thread, and I have useful stuff in this post, I don't think this officially counts as a necro.
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