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PostPosted: Sun Jun 08, 2014 3:48 pm 
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hi everybody i just joined this site and i wanna show u guys here my ships

let me start with a small transport ship

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hope u guys tell me is it good for a starter or not :)


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2014 2:29 am 
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Welcome to the forums! :D (We could always use more people on here.)

Let me give you some pointers on your ship here:
-Color seems fine, but it could use some little details here and there. (doodads and glows to finish it off)
-Section work seems a little slapped on there, so when building ships, try to make the sections flow or look like they have a purpose.
-The stocks sections aren't as popular as they once were, but that doesn't mean u can't use them, if you like them, and want to continue making stock ships, have a look at my forum.
-Another important thing, when making a ship try to start with the center sections first, as this gives the impression that your ship is built tough. Without any sections in the middle, it looks like 2 halves (Is that how you spell that?) joined together but aren't connected in anyway.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 12, 2014 8:17 pm 
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Have you even read the rules jason? You should make your own topic.
As for the stock ship: what Majic said. However, your ships already seem to have a certain feeling of depth in them, which is nice and better than the uberships that usually show up :D

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