The Return of JohnStar145's Fleet (I'm Re awaken :3)
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The Return of JohnStar145's Fleet (I'm Re awaken :3)
Critiques and Suggestion would be nice ^^
Re: The Return of JohnStar145's Fleet (I'm Re awaken :3)
You could layer the flat parts with smaller sections.
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Re: The Return of JohnStar145's Fleet (I'm Re awaken :3)
*poke* A New Ship I might Discontinued the first one since I freakishly forgot to save the ship >.>
as Always C&C always appreciated
as Always C&C always appreciated
Re: The Return of JohnStar145's Fleet (I'm Re awaken :3)
You really shouldn't blend SW sections with Shiny ones. It looks...weird.
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Re: The Return of JohnStar145's Fleet (I'm Re awaken :3)
^Seconded.
Other than that there's those weird bits in front. I guess that it's a weapon (a beam looking at the name) but it just looks awful that way. The shape of that ship is pretty good though. The connection between the hull and those engines... There should be something blue in the back middle section of your ship IMO.
Other than that there's those weird bits in front. I guess that it's a weapon (a beam looking at the name) but it just looks awful that way. The shape of that ship is pretty good though. The connection between the hull and those engines... There should be something blue in the back middle section of your ship IMO.
Quite frankly I wonder why I ever began making ships for this. You see, my work never becomes quite as good as I feel it deserves to.
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Re: The Return of JohnStar145's Fleet (I'm Re awaken :3)
Sure, I will redesigned the whole ship maybe not tomorrow or the next day or the day after that.-Desert- wrote:^Seconded.
Other than that there's those weird bits in front. I guess that it's a weapon (a beam looking at the name) but it just looks awful that way. The shape of that ship is pretty good though. The connection between the hull and those engines... There should be something blue in the back middle section of your ship IMO.
I might do it sometime in summer since I am freakishly loaded with projects on a subject related (I.E. DataStructure, Networking, System Analysis and Design(a.k.a SAD 1), and other project that haven't announce yet....)
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Re: The Return of JohnStar145's Fleet (I'm Re awaken :3)
Right...
It's not urgent but it's nice you're going to redesign it. Don't hurry, forum activity isn't likely to rise anywhere soon.
It's not urgent but it's nice you're going to redesign it. Don't hurry, forum activity isn't likely to rise anywhere soon.
Quite frankly I wonder why I ever began making ships for this. You see, my work never becomes quite as good as I feel it deserves to.