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CryoWare Heavy Yards ship
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Wow cryo nice ship you made here.
Flawless.
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Nicely done. I think it could benefit from a slight darkening of the darker blue, a bit of a beef up on the struts to the outermost wing parts, and then a second, larger, low-alpha'd fraxy sphere to go over the yellow ones already there (that makes it look like the light is casted onto the nearby hull) like I have in my ships and you've nailed something.
The sectionwork is fantastic here, by the way.
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This ship is freakin' awesome. Center line is visible, but other than that, great job.

Judging by the style it is a Terran ship, right?
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Lukasmah wrote:This ship is freakin' awesome. Center line is visible, but other than that, great job.
Having the centerline visible isn't a bad thing at all, especially with a split-nose design like this. If the main pod/bridge area is nicely solid, then it's fine.
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Doogie12 wrote:
Lukasmah wrote:This ship is freakin' awesome. Center line is visible, but other than that, great job.
Having the centerline visible isn't a bad thing at all, especially with a split-nose design like this. If the main pod/bridge area is nicely solid, then it's fine.
I don't mind the front part of the centerline, the part on the back of the ship bothers me.
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Wow thanks for the positive feedback guys
Lukasmah wrote: I don't mind the front part of the centerline, the part on the back of the ship bothers me.
Which part? the engines, the one that covers the engines or the guns? and yes, it is Terran ship
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CryoSleep wrote:Wow thanks for the positive feedback guys
Lukasmah wrote: I don't mind the front part of the centerline, the part on the back of the ship bothers me.
Which part? the engines, the one that covers the engines or the guns? and yes, it is Terran ship
The part I marked here seems really weird:
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A huge mistake i chose to ignore since i was really tired doing some finishing touches to it (it was 1:00)
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To be honest, I think it looks fine.
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I'm still such a liar :)
No, it's not a mistake because it didn't seem like it was going against the rest of the ship but if it really gives an odd feel to you i'll see what i can do to make it more better

Anyway i'm going to release it after i do some weapon effects on it.
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Well? Is it armed?
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I can't arm shit with a broken screen. It's too dark to see my ship right now because my monitor has a broken brightness since it's burnt which made my screen dimmer, unless you have a program that can increase contrast more.
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What on Earth do you mean by "...it's burnt."
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Necrontyr1998 wrote:What on Earth do you mean by "...it's burnt."
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Screen_burn-in ?
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