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Lukasmah wrote:
zozo-mar wrote:just an upgrade

" the darken doo "

i know it needs weapons but first what do you think about the shape :?:

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Although it's pretty nice general shape wise, this ship has a lot of minors. I don't think I can list all of the small flaws, so here are large ones.

1. Oversaturated colors and dark grey make it seem like it's made of clay.
2. It lacks fine detail and small sectionwork. Doodad it up.
3. Too many large, flat, square sections.
4. Center line is visible
5. It has a boring color scheme. Add midtones.
okay i'll try to fix that but tomorrow 'coz now i've got some works :D but what colors do you suggest to me ??? :?:
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okay this is the final view ( i guess :D )

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it's still boring and detail-less why + don't ever mix stock guns with shinies (Replace their sprites via the ed2 tab)
i would suggest adding details,doodads and replacing gun sprites to it otherwise it's just a boring flying machine outfitted with virtual guns.
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okay shining sprites are hard to me so what about this stock ship it's not finished ( first look )

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You are good at making WTFHUGE stock battleships, IMO
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i removed the wings 'coz i didn't find them good for a ship like this

" the spaho "

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Still suffering the "Split Ship" syndrome but nice, It still needs some depthing though
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CryoSleep wrote:Still suffering the "Split Ship" syndrome but nice, It still needs some depthing though
O.K i'll try to fix that :D
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Well schools start tomorrow so I have to say goodbye see you next summer and I hope Managers Forum that closes the subject, goodbye
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Well i have school too, like you can't play when you have break or something
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Ristyo wrote:Well i have school too, like you can't play when you have break or something
well yes i'll try to spend a little of time gaming/building but i won't submit right here in my thread maybe i'll put some comments on others threads :D :D
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you know even in school days i build because i can manage my time well so don't excuse yourself for not having time to build, all it just takes is time management.
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