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Again, i have remodeled another ship
From

Into


C&C is appreciated (If the ship is good i will put it into my faction.)

That new one is pretty, but I don't quite think I like the wings as they break the flow of the ship.

Hmm i had this problem before and fixed it with this


Now it is pretty similar


Please tell me if it looks better or worse

Yea that's a huge improvement. I see nothing I would do to change anything.

Recolour the cannon on the back. It stands out.

Aside from that, it's fine.

Hmm, maybe its going to be the base shape for the ships in my faction

I am trying a different shipbuilding style, which is a mixture of dst-swnc and kae-shn.
I know this is unfinished but i don't know if this looks good or not.

C&C would be appreciated.

Nice shape, but it feels a bit bare or armorless

Did you resize the 'wing' bits? They look a bit blurry, but the ship is good. Kinda looks like it has 4 torp' tubes on the front.

It's okay, but the previous one you posted was better. Not a huge fan of this new style.

@Necrontyr no I didn't resize the wing bits
@Lukasmah I know the previous one was better, because I was still practicing with the new style.

So I am working on another ship with the same style as above, it is still unfinished.


C&C On the section work would be appreciated.

You seem to have a mildly curvy theme to your sectionwork with the others. The Turhon seems to use this very well, meanwhile this ship has quite a bit more blockyness with the internal sections. Personally, I'd try to develop upon that concept rather than aiming for this boxy style, but I can see the boxiness working for a freighter design, or if you are aiming for a more practically oriented faction with the Turhon being a higher-tech or prototype ship.

I am actually trying to use those two sprite packs, with the basic rule of dst for the main body and shiny for the outer body, I tried to use this since I am not very experienced making big ships wih shiny.

So i made some more ships for my faction


This one is based of the previous one



Also a few days ago i made a cargo ship thing, but C&C on all of these would be appreciated.


(I know the first two ships are really bright, and i am not planning to put the last ship on my faction.)