Ristyo's Ships?

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Re: Ristyo's Ships?

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Again, i have remodeled another ship
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Into
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C&C is appreciated (If the ship is good i will put it into my faction.)
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That new one is pretty, but I don't quite think I like the wings as they break the flow of the ship.
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Hmm i had this problem before and fixed it with this
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Now it is pretty similar
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Please tell me if it looks better or worse :)
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Yea that's a huge improvement. I see nothing I would do to change anything.
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Recolour the cannon on the back. It stands out.

Aside from that, it's fine.
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Hmm, maybe its going to be the base shape for the ships in my faction
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I am trying a different shipbuilding style, which is a mixture of dst-swnc and kae-shn.
I know this is unfinished but i don't know if this looks good or not.
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Nice shape, but it feels a bit bare or armorless
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Did you resize the 'wing' bits? They look a bit blurry, but the ship is good. Kinda looks like it has 4 torp' tubes on the front.
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It's okay, but the previous one you posted was better. Not a huge fan of this new style.
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@Necrontyr no I didn't resize the wing bits
@Lukasmah I know the previous one was better, because I was still practicing with the new style.
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So I am working on another ship with the same style as above, it is still unfinished.
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C&C On the section work would be appreciated.
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You seem to have a mildly curvy theme to your sectionwork with the others. The Turhon seems to use this very well, meanwhile this ship has quite a bit more blockyness with the internal sections. Personally, I'd try to develop upon that concept rather than aiming for this boxy style, but I can see the boxiness working for a freighter design, or if you are aiming for a more practically oriented faction with the Turhon being a higher-tech or prototype ship.
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I am actually trying to use those two sprite packs, with the basic rule of dst for the main body and shiny for the outer body, I tried to use this since I am not very experienced making big ships wih shiny.
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So i made some more ships for my faction
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This one is based of the previous one
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Also a few days ago i made a cargo ship thing, but C&C on all of these would be appreciated. :)
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(I know the first two ships are really bright, and i am not planning to put the last ship on my faction.)
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