BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
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- BlueScreenOfDeath123
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BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
Well,im still working on new shn style and have not got anything good to present yet,so for now,my stockies
Cocel assault variant
Cocel support variant
Hesition heavy destroyer
Bacormil heavy armoured battlecruiser
Oracle class advanced destroyer
No-name ultra old unclassed ship
Windvane class civilain cargo ship
Cocel assault variant
Cocel support variant
Hesition heavy destroyer
Bacormil heavy armoured battlecruiser
Oracle class advanced destroyer
No-name ultra old unclassed ship
Windvane class civilain cargo ship
If i see something that looks good,i will most likley attempt on making something like it.
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Re: BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
The "Bacormil heavy armoured battlecruiser" is the best of these. They could all use some shading. It helps with any ship.
2nd best is "No-name ultra old unclassed ship"
Its class should be frigate or gunship.
2nd best is "No-name ultra old unclassed ship"
Its class should be frigate or gunship.
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- BlueScreenOfDeath123
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Re: BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
Still working on theese,theyre just stock ships,so i don't won't to spend too much time on them,i also feel like i ruined the corcel by actaully arming it,before i put stuff on it it looked the best in my eyes,i have one shn ship i just whooped up,i call it the boxy,its an asymetrical hunk of junk,and ive knicknammed the ultra oldy,Tempest.
If i see something that looks good,i will most likley attempt on making something like it.
- Necrontyr1998
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Re: BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
The first 2 are borderline weapon cluttered. I think I prefer the 'Oracle' to the 'Bocormil' simply because it has some uniform to its weapon placement.
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Re: BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
Funny, hose two are the ones I dislike the most. Bacormil looks like a boring triangle with no interesting detail to spice it up, and the unarmed one looks like a trianlge with something attached onto it. A bit of detail, but still just triangle. The other ones are pretty cool, though.Zalausai wrote:The "Bacormil heavy armoured battlecruiser" is the best of these. They could all use some shading. It helps with any ship.
2nd best is "No-name ultra old unclassed ship"
Its class should be frigate or gunship.
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- BlueScreenOfDeath123
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Re: BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
New ships
Blocky-Block class Block
Corogon strike carrier.
Blocky-Block class Block
Corogon strike carrier.
If i see something that looks good,i will most likley attempt on making something like it.
Re: BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
Weapon spam aside, I think the Cocel is actually the best-looking ship.
In fact, it would be a rather good-looking ship.
Your shiny ship, on the other hand... Leaves much to be desired.
I find the main problem to be the abrupt transitions between the core and the wing struts, and again from the wing struts to the... wing-thingies.
The transitions should be made to looks smoother; more natural.
Aside from that, the struts could use some beefing up.
They're borderline anorexic as is, and I'm left wondering where the hell they came from seeing as none of your other ships suffer from such a problem (the corgon does a little, but at least those struts are shorter.)
Anyway, as a lot of the veteran ship builders have said before, the only way to improve is to keep practicing so keep at it.
In fact, it would be a rather good-looking ship.
Your shiny ship, on the other hand... Leaves much to be desired.
I find the main problem to be the abrupt transitions between the core and the wing struts, and again from the wing struts to the... wing-thingies.
The transitions should be made to looks smoother; more natural.
Aside from that, the struts could use some beefing up.
They're borderline anorexic as is, and I'm left wondering where the hell they came from seeing as none of your other ships suffer from such a problem (the corgon does a little, but at least those struts are shorter.)
Anyway, as a lot of the veteran ship builders have said before, the only way to improve is to keep practicing so keep at it.
- calvin1211
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Re: BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
Yeah, the box looks like a horrible kludge. Your stock ships are much better, save for some weaponspam.
- BlueScreenOfDeath123
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Re: BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
I balance all the ships diffrently,for example,the oracle and windvane are meant to fight pirates and aliens,when the corcel is meant to fight this old and archiced fleet i found,i think some guy named strideo made it.
If i see something that looks good,i will most likley attempt on making something like it.
- calvin1211
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Re: BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
As mentioned many times on this board, instead of having to shove weapons everywhere, you can just edit weapon stats to get the same power while cutting down on the number of weapons so it looks prettier.
Re: BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
BlueScreenOfDeath123 wrote:New ships
Blocky-Block class Block
Corogon strike carrier.
i like this little carrier nice
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Re: BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
I would agree with the struts - even from a non-aesthetic point of view they are a bit dangerous at best.Netharis wrote:Your shiny ship, on the other hand... Leaves much to be desired.
I find the main problem to be the abrupt transitions between the core and the wing struts, and again from the wing struts to the... wing-thingies.
The transitions should be made to looks smoother; more natural.
Aside from that, the struts could use some beefing up.
They're borderline anorexic as is, and I'm left wondering where the hell they came from seeing as none of your other ships suffer from such a problem (the corgon does a little, but at least those struts are shorter.)
but I think you could make it look a bit better by removing the block on the bottom strut and then mirroring it, and maybe adding engines on the back of the struts.
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- BlueScreenOfDeath123
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Re: BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
Got a new shn ship up here yal go:
Its known as the excadalic missile destroyer,one of the oldest ships of the GSEC but it was remodelded (Inspired from the long lost stock design i made)
Its known as the excadalic missile destroyer,one of the oldest ships of the GSEC but it was remodelded (Inspired from the long lost stock design i made)
If i see something that looks good,i will most likley attempt on making something like it.
- Majicnanas
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Re: BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
The lack of a center sprite bothers me, A LOT.
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- BlueScreenOfDeath123
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Re: BSOD Shipyards(WARNING-WARNING-SHIP GOODNESS MAY VARY)
In the original i had a section there,but then decided to cover it with a glow ball to give it the open generator feel i wanted it to have.
If i see something that looks good,i will most likley attempt on making something like it.