Well, I really like this one. The runes fit in well, too. But yeah, I agree with Necro, the shield looks out of place. The core thing could also use some work. Add a bit of glow and some flare, maybe?MiramAlt wrote:another one
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The shields are fine for me hmmmm...
anyway another one
Trying to put some color-variation
anyway another one
Trying to put some color-variation
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Having antennae on only one side of an otherwise symmetrical ship doesn't look too good.MiramAlt wrote:The shields are fine for me hmmmm...
anyway another one
Trying to put some color-variation
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Yea that's totally not true.Lukasmah wrote: Having antennae on only one side of an otherwise symmetrical ship doesn't look too good.
Miram, it looks fine, although you did color it weird. The higher up sections should be lighter, and it should get progressively darker as it goes down.
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Like this doogie?
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The opposite of that -.-
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I will clarify this for you Miram. The game views ships from the top. The sections that are closest to the player (the higher up on the ship vertically that they are if it were viewed from the front) the brighter they should be.Doogie12 wrote:The higher up sections should be lighter, and it should get progressively darker as it goes down.
The sections that are lower on the ship (more towards the ship's bottom, the darker they should be.)
Reiterate:
When people say that the top of the ship should be brighter, they actually mean the areas that would be on top of the ship (if it were viewed from the side instead of the top).
Helpful:
One simple trick that use is to start bright in the center (near the core) and get darker as sections get farther away.
Has written a series of tutorials for the newbies
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Prety+ty good. Maybe make those runes glow just a little bit and make the darkes parts just a bit brighter, because when they are this dark detail can't be seen. Other than that, it looks really good. Much better than before.
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Ps:The Runes have a small glow now
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That's much better. It's probably my favorite now.
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It Does need some engine glows though.
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Final version
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Will you provide download for your ships someday?
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go aheadLukasmah wrote:Will you provide download for your ships someday?
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