Welp, decided to hit this boat

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Welp, decided to hit this boat

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Hellow everyoneeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

I've been a bit of a lurker as I'm following arts school, trying the game industry.

Around 3 years ago, on highschool some close friends of mine played this game and I always saw them playing around with the shipmaker here and then :D I don't really know their usernames, I do know that they posted a lot of the forums and probably have been banned from it, my friendship ended with them after school as they turned into childish obstacles.

Still watched this forum and see great spaceships fly by, I was astounded seeing this game grow :D

Thought myself, why not give it a shot, as I also study to draw spaceships? :oops:


Ah well here's a try, might be that i ripped off other famous shipbuilders's techniques by seeing their work :roll: Sorry if i did.

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It's not terrible, but it uses really outdated sections that are vastly inferior to the Shiny sections most people use now. Still, it's not bad at all. Welcome to the forums.
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A ship i could only wish to make,however im not really good at all
If i see something that looks good,i will most likley attempt on making something like it.
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^90% of skill is practice. I started off far inferior to both of you.

@OP, I actually like it, but Anna here pretty much nailed it's major issue.
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The ship isn't bad at all for the sprites used, personally I hate those weapon sprites though. The coloration is good, the shape is interesting and there's a good use of doodads.
But they are just good, I reckon you can do better.

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Welcome new meat new member! It's perfectly fine to ripoff be inspired by others' work, as long as you don't copy section-for-section and at least credit them. I can't really add to what the others have said; the sections are outdated by even SW-style standards however I do like the shape. Like Anna said, get the fancy Shiny sections.
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Re: Welp, decided to hit this boat

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Thank you guys for the feedback, i continued it on!

found these newer sections hard to use though..

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My thanks to the server admin Anna for fixing my forum rights and being my number 1 tutorial when i was lurking these forums :D :D
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That's an improvement, but not a huge one. Shiny sections need practice, lots of practice. And you seem to have quite the head start.
I really look forward to what you can do in the future.

Edit: thanks Zal
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Try to use DST_swnc, I find them really easy to use.
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Except don't make whole ships out of nothing but DST_swnc because it results in lazy shipbuilding and over-dependence.
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What he said.

Also, Anna, was that an insult?
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Majicnanas wrote:What he said.

Also, Anna, was that an insult?
It's only an insult if you want it to be. Anna was just saying to not depend on DST sections.
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Majicnanas wrote:What he said.

Also, Anna, was that an insult?
It wasn't intended as one, no. You are one of the few people who is capable of making things that are largely good with only DST sections, though I do think you'd improve if you expanded your repertoire to include Shiny sections as well. There have been other members who used only DST sections and it results usually in people lazily slapping sections together and ending up with big greebly messes. DST are generally just not good used alone. They need to be combined with other sections to be used to their full effect.
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I will take your critics in my notepad and return after I have trained enough! :)
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Well please do post your ships as you go, we like to see progress :D
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