At long last, I made a thing ... again. An empress returns?
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At long last, I made a thing ... again. An empress returns?
It took some amount of sleep deprivation, emo music, and is slightly inspired by one of Anna's recent ships. It's also lacking guns yet so I'm not finished with it, but I figured it was finished enough to post. It's supposed to be a beam artillery destroyer or something.
Edit: This is also my first successful attempt at building anything from the "Shiny" sections.
Edit2: New thing
Last edited by Lizzie on Sat May 04, 2013 11:57 pm, edited 6 times in total.
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Re: At long last, I made a thing ... again.
It makes me so happy that you've finally picked up shipmaker again. It's so pretty, too!
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Re: At long last, I made a thing ... again.
And thus I am reminded that I still am mediocre as a ship builder. Love it Lizzie, so pretty.
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Re: At long last, I made a thing ... again. A empress return
I can't see your ship due to the school filter, but I think it will look good.
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Re: At long last, I made a thing ... again. A empress return
Awesome ship, Lizzie! You still have the industrial design aesthetic, and it is awesome with the purple! Also,
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Re: At long last, I made a thing ... again. A empress return
It has a great depth to it and I like the use of color. Looks like there are some great mounts for when you do arm it, but maybe have some belly turrets too. The two purple armor pieces at the back seem like they might be a pixel forward or something? Maybe by design. I'm not used to you vets building such small ships... Keep going, you need to restore your fleet so you can reclaim your empire from all these feeder races!
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Re: At long last, I made a thing ... again. A empress return
[12:04] <MarieHawke> you know, Lizzie? are the furthest outriggers supposed to be above or below the plane of the ship?
[12:04] <MarieHawke> because I can easily imagine this thing having a gullwing shape or something idk
[12:04] <MarieHawke> from a frontal perspective
[12:04] <STARSTRUCK> looks to me like the center pods are above and the front ones are below
[12:05] <STARSTRUCK> cool mental image, actually
[12:05] <MarieHawke> that's exactly what I was thinking, yeah
[12:05] <danny420dale> yup[
[12:05] <_Lizzie_> They could be
[12:05] <MarieHawke> but the front ones I'd think wouldn't be raised at all because field generators or some bullshit like that
[12:06] <MarieHawke> idk, I'm just gonna copypaste this IRC log into your thread as commentary because fuck it.
That said? Great, now it's my turn, isn't it?
[12:04] <MarieHawke> because I can easily imagine this thing having a gullwing shape or something idk
[12:04] <MarieHawke> from a frontal perspective
[12:04] <STARSTRUCK> looks to me like the center pods are above and the front ones are below
[12:05] <STARSTRUCK> cool mental image, actually
[12:05] <MarieHawke> that's exactly what I was thinking, yeah
[12:05] <danny420dale> yup[
[12:05] <_Lizzie_> They could be
[12:05] <MarieHawke> but the front ones I'd think wouldn't be raised at all because field generators or some bullshit like that
[12:06] <MarieHawke> idk, I'm just gonna copypaste this IRC log into your thread as commentary because fuck it.
That said? Great, now it's my turn, isn't it?
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Re: At long last, I made a thing ... again. A empress return
Like where exactly?jwa8402 wrote:Looks like there are some great mounts for when you do arm it, but maybe have some belly turrets too.
I have no idea what you mean by this. Elaborate please.The two purple armor pieces at the back seem like they might be a pixel forward or something?
Shiny sections makes that easier ... well once you learn how to use them anyway. I had a ... mental barrier of sorts making it impossible for me to figure out what to do with them for the longest time. It appears that some of Anna's recent designs helped me shatter that barrier. If I can maintain the momentum and make something else is a different problem though. I do have some ideas for a larger ship perhaps though. We'll see if anything comes of it.Maybe by design. I'm not used to you vets building such small ships...
The IVL is likely dead. I may make a new empire from their ashes though. We shall seeKeep going, you need to restore your fleet so you can reclaim your empire from all these feeder races!
Why in gods name did you not wait until you could see the ship then before posting?Majicnanas wrote:I can't see your ship due to the school filter, but I think it will look good.
Re: At long last, I made a thing ... again. A empress return
I like this. Lizzie, as self-proclaimed sensei I demand you me more.
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It looks nice. It might benefit from yellow doodad lights to compliment the violet.
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Re: At long last, I made a thing ... again. A empress return
I actually tried those. I ended up hating how it looked.It looks nice. It might benefit from yellow doodad lights to compliment the violet.
Re: At long last, I made a thing ... again. An empress retur
Sorry this was the spot I meant. Yes, I could find so little to criticize that we are down to pixels
As for the belly turret, was just an idea. Usually there tends to be a huge beam mount dominating the middle of the ship, but since this is fairly small and I like it, figured putting the beam on the bottom would be a nice change-up. Can't remember if the beam itself always shows up on top of the ship though instead of the layer the weapon is on, cuz that would look weird then.
As for the belly turret, was just an idea. Usually there tends to be a huge beam mount dominating the middle of the ship, but since this is fairly small and I like it, figured putting the beam on the bottom would be a nice change-up. Can't remember if the beam itself always shows up on top of the ship though instead of the layer the weapon is on, cuz that would look weird then.
Re: At long last, I made a thing ... again. An empress retur
Err... The whole ship itself is a giant beam cannon.jwa8402 wrote:Sorry this was the spot I meant. Yes, I could find so little to criticize that we are down to pixels
As for the belly turret, was just an idea. Usually there tends to be a huge beam mount dominating the middle of the ship, but since this is fairly small and I like it, figured putting the beam on the bottom would be a nice change-up. Can't remember if the beam itself always shows up on top of the ship though instead of the layer the weapon is on, cuz that would look weird then.
Re: At long last, I made a thing ... again. An empress retur
I made a new ship, it is also unarmed right now. I'll add guns to them later when I feel like messing around with the weapons.
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It could benefit from some glows on those round black sections along the center line. Maybe in the dark circular parts on the wings sections as well. They could be a faint oranges / yellow or violet like the rest of the ship.
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