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Re: Miram Off topic ships.

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here
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idk if its good or bad
I'm wanna follow you guys opinion
you too Anna.
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Background:
That background makes it difficult to see.

Ship:
It appears very front-heavy. Try extending the wings to wrap around the rear of the ship. This will create a "shell" appearance and protect from flankers.

Color:
The violet wings could benefit from more shades to create depth.
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you guys wanna laugh at my face but I'm accidentally deleted the other ship
but I'm made another one
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Name:ziretsus
Size:109.13
speed:1.50
Turning:0.75
AI Type: flanking AI
Class: Shield frigate.
Weapons:
5X Double Light Blue Lasers
4X Tiny blue lasers
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I'm start learn how to SHN sections working.
Critics / suggestions is welcome
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So much better. Although I question the practice of putting th blue sections underneath the grey.
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I cannot stress how much better this is ( it's not brilliant but still). Although, I think you should make some ships of a different shape.

With this one, I would agree with doogie.
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you guys liked why don't make more?
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I'm wanna make a experiment with shape late.
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You still speak like gollum... but i like the ship it has a nice design and looks like the opposite of the novians to me.
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You need to start making individual goddamn ships instead of making bigger versions of the same ship over and over again. Look at my ships! They're not just the same thing in different sizes, they're different goddamn shapes for the most part.
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2X SAME ships with all same things they are brothers because they are the same shit.
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omg people look
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omg they are like the same! I'm can't see teh difference of they
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You are a fucking retard, Miram. That last one you made is literally the only one which really stands out. All the others are just "Triangles with dark pylons between the core and the central bit, the exact over-all shape, the same curvy blue bits on the edges, everything is the fucking same. They're just bigger!"

It's lazy and stupid. If you're going to be lazy, at least don't be so obvious about it. Nobody gives a shit if you can just take the same ship and make bigger versions of it ad nauseum.

EDIT: Several people in IRC have outright said they're not going to bother commenting on your ships because you keep making the exact same ship over and over again.
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Anna wrote:You are a fucking retard, Miram. That last one you made is literally the only one which really stands out. All the others are just "Triangles with dark pylons between the core and the central bit, the exact over-all shape, the same curvy blue bits on the edges, everything is the fucking same. They're just bigger!"

It's lazy and stupid. If you're going to be lazy, at least don't be so obvious about it. Nobody gives a shit if you can just take the same ship and make bigger versions of it ad nauseum.

EDIT: Several people in IRC have outright said they're not going to bother commenting on your ships because you keep making the exact same ship over and over again.
I'm have no idea of what you are talking about
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They're still the same ship Miram, one's just bigger than the other.
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Doogie12 wrote:They're still the same ship Miram, one's just bigger than the other.
still have no idea what you guys are talking about I'm using only the same core to building the ships
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It's the same core, with the same sections at the same angle going outwards to support identical blue sections that are all curved in the same manner. Yea, they're pretty much the same.
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The ships are very similar in shape. Look here, these are different starships.

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Heretic Ships
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They are from the same faction, but their shapes are different

Talen: Arrow shape
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Vitalia: Heart Shape
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Omen: Triangle Shape
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Cerberus: Brick shape
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Just because they are the same faction, they don't have to be the same shape all the time.
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