Miram Off topic ships.

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Re: Miram Off topic ships.

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Ambitious Builder wrote:I have chosen the other one because it is bigger.
^That is the proper wording. Is it really that hard to check? I have trouble with grammar but that's... Just try, please just try!

Sidenote: If you ask for comments and criticism then consider it after its given, especially when its intended to be helpful!
My god get fuck off please. I'm talking about ships not about grammar.
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People lets focus on topic not on grammar mistakes.
this is get old
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Re: Miram Off topic ships.

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1. We have been giving you advice on your ships, which you have promptly ignored every time.
2. We have no clue what you're saying because your grammar is that awful.
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Doogie12 wrote:1. We have been giving you advice on your ships, which you have promptly ignored every time.
2. We have no clue what you're saying because your grammar is that awful.
I'm not ignored any critics/suggestions
For this reason I've stooped used the old ss sprite as a core and ds sprites
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now I'm need to leave for 2 Days so seya people
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Yes you have.
We told you to be original with your cores, so what you did was you obtained a new core and then made 8 ships out of it that look identical.
I've told you that you shouldn't color only the outer edges and low layers, but rather the main hull of the ship, to which you have given no recognition of and haven't stopped doing.
I've told you that the wings on your ships looked cluttered. So, naturally, you made 4 more exactly the same.
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Re: Miram Off topic ships.

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Haha that video pretty much defines Anna when it comes to this forum...

I for one like what you are trying to do with the most recent battleship. Very battlestarish. I do think it needs some lighter grey on the middle bits to give it some contrast. I would personally make the wings a bit darker but that is a choice.Those weapons are also too big imo. There are three rather blocky spots; on the sides of the engines, the wings, and the neck, which could be broken up to match the overall shape,
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