Miram Off topic ships.

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Re: Miram Off topic ships.

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The wings look quite cluttered.
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need suggestions!
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Re: Miram Off topic ships.

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Needs less camouflaged background.
Needs more variety in section use.
Needs more color.
Needs more doodads.
Needs more cowbell.
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Re: Miram Off topic ships.

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Zal hits the bullseye again, pay attention to what he said!
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Also needs dockyard appendages ( grabbers, laser cutters, fuel tanks, ect.).
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only left add fighters bays
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Re: Miram Off topic ships.

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Still needs moar varied sections and moar cowbell.
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garrrrrrrrrrg boring times
I'm wanna making a new faction "Russian army"
heres the fist ship
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I can say with confidence that it is your best ship yet, but you're still using the exact same core sections you've had on your last 9000 ships.
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Doogie12 wrote:I can say with confidence that it is your best ship yet, but you're still using the exact same core sections you've had on your last 9000 ships.
I'm wanna using this core only for this one
the rest I'm wanna using my own cores.
Promise.
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Miram wrote:
Doogie12 wrote:snip.
I'm wanna using only for this core for this one
the rest I'm wanna using my own cores.
Promise.
Wat
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Doogie12 wrote:
Miram wrote:
Doogie12 wrote:snip.
I'm wanna using only for this core for this one
the rest I'm wanna using my own cores.
Promise.
Wat
Fixed the fatal grammar error
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No, no your grammar is still terrible after "fixing" it.
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Anna wrote:No, no your grammar is still terrible after "fixing" it.
Do not tell me something I already know.
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Re: Miram Off topic ships.

Post by STARSTRUCK »

It's a decent ship but fuck that core. Anyway, let's go.

"I'm wanna using" should be either "I'm using" or "I want to use".

Any time you're about to say "I'm wanna," (for instance) just mentally redact it to "I want to". "I'm" is a contraction of "I am," where "am" is the verb to-be, as in "I am a terrible person who needs to die". "I'm wanna" expands to "I am want to," which is more or less a string of vomit.

I think that should fix about a quarter of your grammar faults.
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