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Satin181
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Satin181's Shipyards

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Hi! Satin here with my ships I make that I deem good enough to post.
So without further ado. Let the ship making begin!

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The Bonebreaker

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Civilian Yacht

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Pirate Corvette
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Their great, but they look a little bland. Try adding colors to make them not look made out of concrete. :D
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Majicnanas wrote:Their great, but they look a little bland. Try adding colors to make them not look made out of concrete. :D
Wait till my next one, its Pirate themed, Yargh! (Not the old kind, the Battleships Forever kind)
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The sprites on that first one look pretty old, what are they?

The second ship looks a little cluttered and with no sence of depth ( normally the darker sprites are the ones underneath the ship).
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Necrontyr1998 wrote:The sprites on that first one look pretty old, what are they?

The second ship looks a little cluttered and with no sence of depth ( normally the darker sprites are the ones underneath the ship).
That my friend would be the Bio section pack. Its in the ship maker repack. Ini's called Bone
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The pirate one has interesting depthing, but the weopons placement could be better, and coloring, or shading at least.
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i'm gonna be honest.
Both of those shiny ships looks Clutttered that you may want to Avoid while the shape may be good you have to avoid it at all Costs
i don't like how you used the fake aegis which makes the pirate corvette even uglier but if you remove the sections with fake aegis and the ablative armor the pirate corvette will look more better and less cluttered.
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And Please don't zoom in while taking screenshots
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/\ nicely executed cryo

But don't worry satin my first ships were much worse....
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