My ship

[StarKnight12]

This is my Work any Critiques and advice is welcome

[R0ni]

( o. O)/ Hai! Welcome to the forums.

Well, With stock parts it is hard to get into detail, but I see some depth in this ship. Counting with what spirites this ship has been built on, I would say it is rather good. Especially for your first post. Once you have experimented enough with stocks, I suggest testing custom spirites made by forum members. Thats where the real fun and epicness starts.

[StarKnight12]

( o. O)/ Hai! Welcome to the forums.

Well, With stock parts it is hard to get into detail, but I see some depth in this ship. Counting with what spirites this ship has been built on, I would say it is rather good. Especially for your first post. Once you have experimented enough with stocks, I suggest testing custom spirites made by forum members. Thats where the real fun and epicness starts.

Tnx for the good comment, and I am already doing some shinnies section sprites but I can't extend the skeleton for my ship I need some more deeper depth explanation for how to make a good shinny ship in BSF cause I'm just stuck with my core of the skeletal of my ship >.>

[Necrontyr1998]

Hi, nice to see new members endevouring into the art of ship building!
I see your ship has some good section work depth wise but i must say, try not to use super-saturated colours too much. Try to dim them down.

[StarKnight12]

Hi, nice to see new members endevouring into the art of ship building!
I see your ship has some good section work depth wise but i must say, try not to use super-saturated colours too much. Try to dim them down.

thank you, but how can I fit the colors correctly?

[Doogie12]

Ignore him. Saturated colors are fine with retro-styled sections. I would, however, work on sectionwork. Unfortunately, the only way to do this is practice, practice, and practice. Looking around to see what some of us have done is a good idea. If you're into retro sections, look back in the ship archives to see some cool stuff. I look forward to your future ventures.

[CryoSleep]

Oh welcome Mr.StarKnight12 (Starts Blabbering Nonsense)
Shape and color is both nice, section work is bad, but i see a you got potential so keep it up!
Anyways hope you stay active and don't forget to help and revive this community.

[StarKnight12]

Oh welcome Mr.StarKnight12 (Starts Blabbering Nonsense)
Shape and color is both nice, section work is bad, but i see a you got potential so keep it up!
Anyways hope you stay active and don't forget to help and revive this community.

Tnx, and I will try to keep being active as I can.

Revamp
A Bulky ugly ship that has no sense of design a little help would be greatful

[CryoSleep]

i don't really know how to fix that lump of shit.....wait i think i can but i'll do that after our fashion show though

[Necrontyr1998]

Your first ship's colour scheme was good I was merely warning you of using highly saturated colour's on ships such as your recent 'design'.
The almost neon blue just does not fit on those sprites

You can change the sidebars colour's by right clicking them and choosing the one you want.

[Deltaflyer]

Shut the fuck up Cryo, you can't complain about the forum being dead then have a pop at its newest member's efforts.

The ship is cluttered up with a load of sprites that don't mesh well together. The colours don't blend too well together, try desaturating them and using more shades of the colours to illustrate depth. Have a look around the forum, nick a few ideas/techniques from more experienced builders (Doogie, Calvin, SS and Anna, most notably) and see if that affects your building. Other than that, carry on doing what you're doing and you'll be good in no time.

[StarKnight12]

i don't really know how to fix that lump of shit.....wait i think i can but i'll do that after our fashion show though

tnx, oh and if you gonna show and upload the ship's file (.sb4 and .shp) pls upload the custom sprite that you will add ok?

tnx in advance

[StarKnight12]

Shut the fuck up Cryo, you can't complain about the forum being dead then have a pop at its newest member's efforts.

The ship is cluttered up with a load of sprites that don't mesh well together. The colours don't blend too well together, try desaturating them and using more shades of the colours to illustrate depth. Have a look around the forum, nick a few ideas/techniques from more experienced builders (Doogie, Calvin, SS and Anna, most notably) and see if that affects your building. Other than that, carry on doing what you're doing and you'll be good in no time.

pls, don't fight. it is true that the forum is almost dead like site because there aren't much active people here >.> unless someone that is popular in youtube had made a video of the game and the forum it will be more active than dead.

and thank you for your advice ^^

[CryoSleep]

I have to admit i was wrong Delta and i was stressed due to family issues but now it's fixed and i was also dumped with a lot of misfortunes like getting into a fight but in the end we were both laughing at what we did anyway so i guess this is a sorry note.

Your pretty good with shape and color when it comes to smaller ships and yes like delta said take a look at the other vet's ships like Doogie's Seven Sins which is one of my favorites and the GGG Industries also which is Anna's Stickied topic and i'll show you one of my newer ships

[StarKnight12]

I have to admit i was wrong Delta and i was stressed due to family issues but now it's fixed and i was also dumped with a lot of misfortunes like getting into a fight but in the end we were both laughing at what we did anyway so i guess this is a sorry note.

Your pretty good with shape and color when it comes to smaller ships and yes like delta said take a look at the other vet's ships like Doogie's Seven Sins which is one of my favorites and the GGG Industries also which is Anna's Stickied topic and i'll show you one of my newer ships

ok, I'll check doogie's seven sin ship and tnx ^^