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The GTNA
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Formerly Nova. During the Events of Darkness assault, they experienced a Crushing Defeat by the Tenacious Darkness and Nirvana, their former Enemy created an Alliance that would Defeat these Barbarous Machines. The GTNA While making a Stand at their Last Fortress Bastion They are Constructing the Frontier, a Sleeper Ship to make their Way to their Home Planet Earth which they hope has made an Aliiance with the Great Protectors. a Fold Warp to Earth Without a rift will take 200 Years.

Terra: 2nd Colony of the First-Era and was Once Called Planet G. The Fold Warp Malfunctioned and the Rift to the Planet Earth Closed, Isolating Humans to their Home Planet.

Sleeper Ships:
Three Ships Under Construction that will carry whats left of the Humans and Nirvanians and will be Escorted until they reach Earth. Protocol "Exodus" Shall be activated by the Captains of Each ships in the Fleet which is the AI will Operate the ships in Full control including Combat systems and contructions of Un-Learning Machines to not make the Same mistake the Creators of the Darkness did.

Project Nova
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Project Nova. The Civil war was intended as a Cover up to Research an Ancient ship that is not known to mankind. a ship that could Counteract the Darkness and that's how they knew what is the Reason why the Darkness Prioritized the Humans and Nirvanians for they knew that this Ship could lead to Their total Eradication
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++FLEET ASSETS+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Ghost Unit
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One of the 3 Units Left After the Events of Darkness Assault. They Operate as Wolf Packs. (My Main Unit)
Paladins
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One of the 3 Units Left. They are In Charge of Defending their Assets.
Warriors
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One of the 3 Units Left. They are In Charge of Gaining grounds and Assaulting Mobile outposts of the Darkness.



++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++THE SHIPS++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Fighters
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GTNA-12 Seraph
Type:Interceptor
HP:40
Speed:10
Turning:5
Armament:
2x Subach HL-7
2x Rockeye M.
D:Most favorite escort of the fleet for their speed and combat performance in the field yet none in the Ghost Unit has a record of it being used as they have a more advanced one they are using.


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GTNA-13 Myrmidon
Type:Space Superiority
HP:50
Speed:10
Turning:5
Armament:
2x Mekhu HL-7
2x Tornado M.
D: The only fighter the Ghost Unit uses for it's performance and unlike any fighter it is able to use heavier armor while able to maintain the speed of an Interceptor making this the Most Sortied among the GU.


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GTNA-14 Palladion
Type:Heavy Bomber
HP:60
Speed:8
Turning:4
Armament:
2x Cyclops (i'll change the weapon in 1.7 to nuke and not some ordinary Missile)
D:The lack of bombers in the Fleet have caused an Uproar and some Pilots demand that they want to pilot a heavy Bomber thus the Geo Tech Industried developed the Palladion a Heavy Bomber Carrying a Nice Payload that Cruisers May want to Fear.
Frigates
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GTNA-01 Aesir
Type:Missile Frigate
HP: 150
Speed: 4
Turning: 2
Armament:
1x Smoke Flak Cannon
2x Ice Storm M.
D:A Versatile frigate capable of Speedy Movements allowing it to Dodge Projectiles and Perform a Counter Attack to it's Target. The Beta of a Hunting Pack and The Sif as the Alpha.


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GTNA-02 Harvog
Type:Multi-Purpose Frigate
HP: 150
Speed: 4
Turning: 4
Armament:
3x Hail Storm HMGPC.
D: Frigate that is deadly in numbers. They are Equipped with new HMGPCs also developed by the Hierarchy Tech in fact the ship itself was Designed by the HT and the most favorite frigate the GU uses. It has Many uses such as Assault Mission, Convoy Raid, Escort Mission and Reconnaissance.
Destroyers
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GTNA-23 Sif
Type:Elite Destroyer
HP:500
Speed:3.50
Turning: 2
Armament:
2x Flake PD Laser
3x Icicle P. Cannons
1x Saber B.
2x Cryo Burst M.
D:The most Deadliest in Combat. Versatile Destroyer capable of dodging and hitting a target with a smaller Beam counterpart of the Ice Queen.


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GTNA-25 Valkyrie
Type: Standard Destroyer
HP: 300
Speed: 3.50
Turning: 2
Armament:
4x Icicle P. Cannons
2x Flake PD Laser
2x Hail Storm LRM
1x Tri-Barreled Icicle P. Cannons
D: A Jack-Of-All-Trades destroyer with customizable Armament but that said most captains doesn't change the armament because of it's performance in Combat. Also best at supporting allies in Medium to Long ranges thanks to it's Hail Storm LRM But Cannot hold out on it's own so it's mostly seen in pairs or task forces.
Cruiser
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GTNA-43 Dragoon
Type:Light Cruiser
HP:700
Speed:2.75
Turning:1.20
Armament:
7x Icicle P. Cannons
2x Tri-Barreled Icicle P. Cannons
2x Cryo Burst M.
3x Flake PD Laser
D:It is Nicked as "Alpha" in Convoy Raid missions. It is like by captain types of armed and ready to kill due to its Fire Power and is mostly found in the frontlines of War. It's armor are among one of the Thickest which is the Light Battleship Armor that is used for strike type Battleships but not very effect against Heavy Beam weaponry.


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GTNA-57 Odin
Type:Heavy Cruiser
HP:1000
Speed:1.60
Turning:0.75
Armament:
7x Icicle P. Cannon
3x Tri-Barreled Icicle P. Cannon
1x Ice Queen B.
4x Flake PD Laser
D: The Odin is the Only cruiser able to Carry a Beam cannon but at the Cost of Speed due to it's Cruiser Sized reactor Unable to support engine to focus the beam cannon's power
Carrier
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GTNA-59 Oni
Type:Light Carrier
HP:700
Speed:1.25
Turning:0.65
Armament:
4x Icicle P. Cannons
1x Tri-Barreled Icicle P. Cannon
D:Poorly Armed Carrier designed only for Infiltration thanks for it's Color and Hull which is built from the Old B-12 Stealth Bomber which is quite usful when delivering payloads without getting detected.
Battleship
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GTNA-54 Heimdall
Type: Assault Battleship
HP:1150
Speed:1
Turning:0.65
Armament:
5x Icicle Tri-Barreled P. Cannons
4x Icicle P. Cannons
2x Avalanche Torp.
3x Ice Queen B.
D: Product from the Joint operation of Hierarchy Tech and Maji Tech. It has Heavier Armor for it's fragile sections and always behind Jotunns to Vanguard it but It's the Lead ship of every Elimination Fleet. It's Cannons are located at the Front to Barrage enemies on Close Distances while Beams Finish the Job.


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GTNA-52 Jotunn
Type:Heavy Battleship
HP:1000
Speed:1
Turning:0.65
Armament:
7x Flake PD Laser
8x Icicle P. Cannons
3x Tri-Barreled Icicle P. Cannons
2x Ice Queen B.
D: It was once Classified and only used by the GU. The Product of the Hierarchy Industries and their Fruits of Labor, armed for the Destruction of those who Stand in it's Way.


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GTNA-99 Colossus
Type:Near Juggernaught
Speed:0.65
Turning:0.65
Armament:
[Unknown]
D:[Classified only to Primarchs the further info only shown to Others]Unknown to races. Legends Foretold a Baseship was able to make it's last Stand to 1000 ships without faltering in the Purge-Era.
Special Assets
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The Torvim Station is the Main base of the Ghost Unit. It's callsign is Stone Henge and Only Known to The Ghost Unit and The Station itself is Being Converted into a Sleeper Ship with a new Callsign called Deep Dream.
The Nirvana
Race that Looks like the Soldiers of Anubis and always Carries a Berret like Energy Knife. Their Armor is Equipped with a Nano Shield Reactor allowing one's survivability assured. Their women are fox like.
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and if possible roni can you ally my faction to yours in the near future of your comic :D
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While the sectionwork is excellent (especially on the Tigris), I'm not a fan of the colourscheme. It's too dark, and plain grey with no doodads is seriously unimpressive. Compare to the other stuff that's been done for War for the Universe in your absence - Everyone's running (flying?) around in distinct bright colours with doodads out the wazoo, while yours just seem dull in comparison.
Also, need to improve spelling and grammar.
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Re: War for the Universe - Nova Empire

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Well, these ships are bit dark and lacking color indeed, but is that not how spaceships normally would be. I usually prefer simple looking, maybe little colourless ships over what seem like flying casinos in space with turrets attached to them. Personally only thing in my opinion that could be added to these would be.. maybe windows.. and maybe just a hint lighter hull painting.

And my comic eh? Well, I suppose we could fit your faction somewhere, but im still just at the beginning, so appearance of Nova empire won't be anywhere in near future. I recently bought new computer, thus am still installing and transferring stuff from my old to this one. I will get back to ship making and drawing very soon, but still, first comes encounter with Miora - then bit later SAR and uuuh, Darkness ( o3o). Ratai does not really make long term alliances, as it has no regional interest in space or systems - they just want to continue their journey.
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i wasn't entirely happy with them since i don't know which color scheme to use for them but i'll fix the color if i have time.
Would dark green be a good color?
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calvin1211 wrote:need to improve spelling and grammar.
Oh you noticed that.... yeah sorry about that i was sleepy and was about to fall to the ground
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You can make greyscale work, but be sure to use a lot of doodads.
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IIRC the ASA are using dark green. You could use the TSE's old dark blue or a shade therof - none of the other factions are using blue as a main colour (though it's a common doodad colour)
Or since CNY is just round the corner, perhaps try some shade of red.
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A red shade every now and then would also fit with the name 'Nova' as well as livening up these ships to be more than they are at the moment. Section placement is good, now we just need a few coloured areas to catch our eyes and make us be like: 'Wow'.
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Re: War for the Universe - Nova Empire

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Well, maybe the ships could have some faction colour, but I don't see them requiring anything strong. I like the dark look of them quite bit. Just lil windows here and dere and stuff. Interested to see more of these ships - and download too. :D
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crimson red and black metal color scheme? or bright red and silver metal color scheme?
BTW a new race will come up after tweaking the colors.
it's name is nirvana and crap i already did tweak the colors to leaf green and dark metal something kinda like Anna's sample ship for kaelis's shinies.
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would this one be nice?
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Re: War for the Universe - Nova Empire

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The ship overall is still a bit too dark (in the grey bits at least). You should also try applying some depthing to the coloured bits.
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To be honest, I think you should go back to the greyscale. Greyscale can look REALLY good if you spam teamstripes, SS windows, and other doodads.
Also I think its hard to believe a civilization that just won a revolution would have perfectly colored and uniform spaceships.
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Re: War for the Universe - Nova Empire

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Agreed there. Not every ship needs to be pimpy blinky. I would imagine dark colours would be ideal for military ships in space - just as most warships on earth have navy blue. ( o. o)/ Back to grayish - just different shades of gray in mah opinion. And Download pwease, so that I can blow these things up. ( ^u^)d
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