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shamrocksoldier · **Joined:** Tue Mar 27, 2012 2:54 am **Posts:** 137

new update! 3 new ships (1 redo) and a slight update of an older design.

Corians:

redo of the Corian assault cruiser. cleaned up a bit and added modular energy barriers. They glow....

XSOR:

I decided to redo the XSOR fleet to reflect the role they have in the story. Now they share similar colors with the Ch'Bet since the Ch'bet created them.

USRF:

The No-Dachi class cruiser is the heaviest standard ship in the rebel fleet. new design.

UNGW:

Due to the lack of anti capital capabilities of smaller UNGW ships, the UNGW commissioned the Aegis class missile destroyer as an anti capital destroyer. though lacking any rapid defensive capability, this ship is effective at dealing Heavy cruise missiles to larger ships.

Doogie12 · **Posted:** Wed May 09, 2012 9:21 am

i don't know whether to like or hate the XSOR retro fan-things

shamrocksoldier · **Joined:** Tue Mar 27, 2012 2:54 am **Posts:** 137

If you love them, they will love you back...
any criticism in specific?

Doogie12 · **Posted:** Wed May 09, 2012 10:25 am

Ah yes, sorry, was on a kindle. Typing isn't fun on those. The corian ship is an extremely basic design, but you nailed those blue glows so i'll give you props. The remaining two are nice and simplistic in their utilitarian style. Much like jwa's stuff.
The Xor ship i would recommend working on those winglets in a better fashion. Make them additive or glowy or whatnot and make them look more contained. The best example I can give you is what I did with Pride on my seven deadly sins thing.

shamrocksoldier · **Joined:** Tue Mar 27, 2012 2:54 am **Posts:** 137

Alright Sounds good. I will try to clean up the XSOR ship. thanks doogie

ZombieBane12 · **Joined:** Fri Apr 20, 2012 11:29 pm **Posts:** 57

i still can't find the SS_windows,SS_windows3 and HorsemonsterRealistic_HM_X_sensors

kittenpillar100 · **Joined:** Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:34 pm **Posts:** 247

No Dachi! Naughty dog...

I dislike the XSOR ship, it lacks flow with all those crazy spikey bits and is a bit glaring in places (mainly the glowy bit). Those fancy-ass sheilds on the corian assault cruiser look quite pretty, mind giving hints as to how to do them? I like the No-Dachi, blocky rebels = awesome for obvious reasons, and the colour scheme is quite pretty, it is a little repetitous in places though. Finally, the Aegis (which in my opinion is the best of the bunch) fits well with the fleet and has excellent flow. I also like the mini thrusters.

Good job!

shamrocksoldier · **Joined:** Tue Mar 27, 2012 2:54 am **Posts:** 137

Heh, well I think I will try to clean up the XSOR ship a bit, then resubmit for your consideration. as for the Corian shields, they're just a fraxy transparent triangle, blending set to additive, with .1 alpha'd fake aegis. the trick is the positioning

Deltaflyer · **Posted:** Fri May 11, 2012 6:12 am

The ships in the OP need a looking at with regards to the mirroring of weaponry, they seem to mis-align, but this just needs a pixel movement up or to the left/right as appropriate. Your ships are really good, with nice variety and a catchiness which is hard to put my finger on. Keep up the good work!

shamrocksoldier · **Joined:** Tue Mar 27, 2012 2:54 am **Posts:** 137

So I finally got around to redoing the Titan. I also renamed it the "Leviathan"

Give me yer comments and criticism

Doogie12 · **Posted:** Tue May 15, 2012 4:49 am

I'm quite liking that, don't think you've quite nailed the wing struts, but other than that I see no flaws. One of the better broadside cruisers recently.

Bad Boy · **Posted:** Tue May 15, 2012 7:18 am

I like it a lot more but doogie's right on the wings. the connecting blue piece is too sudden on both ends, it looks tacked on for the main body and the flat angle difference is jarring for the wings. Also the wings themselves, mainly the armor bits on the outsides, don't really live up to the standards set by the rest of the ship.

shamrocksoldier · **Joined:** Tue Mar 27, 2012 2:54 am **Posts:** 137

Well. I wrote this like 15 minutes ago, but when I tryed to post it all the text got deleted, so heres a simplified version of the back story and blah blah blah new ships blah blah blah

Corian battle frigate

UNGW Socrates class envoy

The largest single Ts'ari ship, the Reaper.

And lastly, my personal favorite, the UNGW Babd Catha! this Athens refit cruiser sports the most powerful main coil gun ever manufactured by man. The ship was criticized by senior officers for being "an over desinged money pit" due to the extreme cost of the refit. This concern was fairly wide spread as the ship cost nearly the same as 4 Basic Athens class.

ZombieBane12 · **Joined:** Fri Apr 20, 2012 11:29 pm **Posts:** 57

when will you put the dl?
me gusta o_o
now for constructive criticism
the corian battle frigate looks much better than your other corian ships its like an angelic design

for the second i like i don't know why but i like it

as for the tsari its still flat hmm how about using some shading to depth it something like the middle is brighter and the sides are more darker

as for the last i don't see much color i can only see the small dark green on it
but the design is good and i see some a little compensating on a part there the flat part looks good

maybe i just don't know what im saying maybe im gonna end up like da_dooley

Doogie12 · **Posted:** Wed May 30, 2012 10:54 pm

The Tsari is flat and bland because it doesn't use any detailed sections. Try using more shiny stuff in order to fit in with the rest of the ships.

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