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lone wolf creations

Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 6:56 am
by lon3wolf
Noob just starting out in this universe. My creation/s so far

Re: lone wolf creations

Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:03 am
by Preacher
ummm soooo many!!! where are the creations? welcome to the forums by the way.

Re: lone wolf creations

Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:14 am
by lon3wolf
Thank you. I forgot to upload them. The first of what i hope to be many models is:
The Jurgen Neolite

Re: lone wolf creations

Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:24 am
by Preacher
Not half bad actually, depthing and section usage at the front is poor, im not sure about the little wings either, but with a splash of colour this could look good, now weaponise it add nice looking engine nozzles and your sorted :)

Re: lone wolf creations

Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 11:32 am
by Da_Dooley
It's actually not that bad. It has a clearly defined shape, no overly stretched sections, and *gasp* no weapon spam! Actually, no weapons at all, which I would keep with atm. It looks really nice, though you should really flesh the design out more. Add some Greeblies. OTT, this is a really nice ship.

Re: lone wolf creations

Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:44 am
by lon3wolf
I have now added weapons to the ship. I still can't decide what to do with the front yet so i've created two variations.

Re: lone wolf creations

Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 5:24 am
by Lord_Baigent
Very nice, much better than my first ships. I like the style you've got going with them all and they definitely fit well together. My one quip with them though is that some of the wing placements do look a little flimsy, but other than that good going. :)

Re: lone wolf creations

Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 5:25 am
by Lord_Baigent
Very nice, much better than my first ships. I like the style you've got going with them all and they definitely fit well together. My one quip with them though is that some of the wing placements do look a little flimsy, but other than that good going. :)

Re: lone wolf creations

Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 7:45 pm
by Imaillusion
The overall shape of all four ships will improve if the front end of the ships tapered down to a point, rather being really blocky and flat. And i agree with Baigent, in that there are parts on the last two ships where the sections get really narrow, it makes those points look really fragile

Re: lone wolf creations

Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 1:30 am
by lon3wolf
The update.
I have started work on the front and also made the wings look stronger.

Re: lone wolf creations

Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 12:01 am
by STARSTRUCK
I liked the variants with the "flimsy-looking" wings better. They had a really unique look.

Re: lone wolf creations

Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2010 1:42 am
by jwa8402
Agreed. When done right, that fragile look can make a ship seem far more advanced. Not a bad start on the bioship either, though it looks like it has eyes at both ends...