Right, let's have another go at asymmetry

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Right, let's have another go at asymmetry

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this is an asymetric ship I made to own (forgot his name) and show that I can do shipbuilding still WIP and inspired by vhorpax

I present: the ironside BC!
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do not fear! it is still a WIP remember!

and here it is edited! still WIP
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darkening on some sections and weapons mainly
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Lol the blue things make it look almost like a research station. One side looks like a major weak point but then again its a WIP, hope you continue with this.
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I like it. The big white guns look out of place, but otherwise its perfectly fine.
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well it looks good?
I guess my brain is used to the BSF top-side veiw of things
erm were did you get those solar panel thing sprites? cause I would like them

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Rockboy, those are horsemonster sprites I believe. And I think it is top side, just assymetrical.

I like it! Only thing is those two white spots, what are they? And the big white guns probably aren't the best choice...Very nice vhorpax type design though.
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Thanks for the C&C! that'll teach kal admra!
but anyways, I myself don't like the front too much, it looks too different compared too the back.
those 'white spots' are part of the ships structure and are probably going to be changede to grey.
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EDIT:revised ship still with old picture for comparison
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very vhorpax-esque, i like it. all i can say is now the weapons seem too dark, they need to both stand out more from the surroundings, and seeing as they're the highest objectsa, be lighter depth wise
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Yeah, don't make them as light as one the original one, just a bit more than it is now.
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The ironside is on hold for the while because I'm bored with it however I feel like posting a ship that is my favorite out of all the ships I've ever made:

A light pirate destroyer!
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Personally I think it's ultra nifty, but you can decide...
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I admit, that's pretty effing sweet. Although once again I would have to say that the guns stand out too much. It also seems like the smaller ones shouldn't be facing to the side.
Other than those slight nitpicks, nice ship.
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Huh, People still use my weapons...

The Tachyons/Plasma Don't fit in with the colour scheme, everything else is alright.
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heck ya se7en, yours and horsemonsters are some of the best weapons we got!
@kittenpillar100: pretty nice little ship! Have you thought about throwing it in the tournament? It looks about the right size range, like 67 or so?
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:3
A rainbow horsie!!!
the purple guns are actually sidewinders but I admit that they don't fit too well with the colour scheme.
I also have a battleship in the same style but it isn't as nifty, if you want it say cheese!
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Quick! Quick! Before it goes dead! :P
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I have made a heavy destroyer to go with the light one and I think its pretty good
C&C please!
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