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BP entry check
Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 6:27 am
by Icy
c&c please
- Current armament: 1x Florini Defence Gun, 1x cool pulsar thingy (the two rotating orbs)
- "cool pulsar thingy" (please name me) being tested
Re: BP entry check
Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 9:27 am
by Da_Dooley
Well, it's certainly better than anything I could make.
Overall, I think you have a nice shape going, though it looks like it could be expanded out the back.
Also, the stripes... IDK what it is... the way you have done them just doesn't appeal to me
Re: BP entry check
Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 9:54 am
by Doogie12
Are you sure you were the one that made this?
I mean, it's fantastic! Probably your best work yet!
Sure, the part that holds the wings in place looks a bit bland, but thats the only problem I noticed.
I'm surprised something this superb came from you. Good work.
I'm also surprised that I flipped out on someone in the exact same way Anna does on facebook 0_o
Re: BP entry check
Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 10:15 am
by Da_Dooley
Also... that weapon... DEFINITELY novel, but... it's... bleah. It doesn't go with the ship.
Silver has a FaceBook?
*begins feverish search*
Re: BP entry check
Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 10:30 am
by Doogie12
@icy: While he does have a point, theres an certain line you cross with weapons thats just awesome enough it fits on any ship. And the ship is generally curvy, so a spirally-laser actually could fit on it...
@Da Dooley: No, I flipped out on Facebook, just like Anna does in general (here)
@Anna: I love you with all my heart...
...you complete me
Re: BP entry check
Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 11:19 am
by Water_and_Wind
Well, the weapon is not completely original (
viewtopic.php?t=5289) but still great to see cool things being done with pulsars. As for the ship itself, you need to work on the transition between the curved outer section and the inner part of the ship.