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Zardian
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new ships,

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after a.. mediumish break on BSF i started fiddling again.
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the 2.. things in the front turn around and fire beams, theyr a turret
and on the sides there are missile launchers, they retract to reload.
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okay, first 2 attempts with shiny

Stalker - Torpedo Bomber
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Raven - Light Gunship
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It looks kinda...fat. The section work is messy in some places. And the oval-like section at the front should be shaded lighter
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less fat for sure, kinda messy . but other than that i think it might be pretty good!
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I will say I like the very front part with the mecha sections; it creates a cool looking internal shape. Sounds like you worked hard on the effects too.
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2 new ships up there, allso would like some specific advice, ive tried using more interesting color schemes a lot but anything that isnt very neutral seems to look terrible and ugly.
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The Torpedo Bomber looks decent. Otherwise, I won't call 'em bad, they're just rather bland... Add some detail, little small doodads, tiny animations, some decals perhaps... Add colour. I agree, Shiny is harder to colour if you don't know what you're doing. It's easy to make it look awfully garish. Still, this is easily helped by taking almost-grays. At least, that's what I found. Some bits can be used with brighter colours, to make them feel like 'plating'.
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