Possibly you don't wanna look at it
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Possibly you don't wanna look at it
This is my first time, I'm nervous.
Any suggestions how i can improve the corvette in aesthetics?
Any suggestions how i can improve the corvette in aesthetics?
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Re: Possibly you don't wanna look at it
Well, first of all, you may want to add some screenshots to that.
As for the ship itself, I like it. I think it's well shaded and coloured, the sectionwork is decent, the weapons look fine on it all. It could use some finer details and doodading. There also seems to be a spot where some large engine would go, yet there are no sections that really look like thrusters or anything of the sort. If you add a more engine-esque section, I'd suggest also adding an engine glow and maybe a thruster module. But other than that, nice ship.
As for the ship itself, I like it. I think it's well shaded and coloured, the sectionwork is decent, the weapons look fine on it all. It could use some finer details and doodading. There also seems to be a spot where some large engine would go, yet there are no sections that really look like thrusters or anything of the sort. If you add a more engine-esque section, I'd suggest also adding an engine glow and maybe a thruster module. But other than that, nice ship.
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Re: Possibly you don't wanna look at it
um i added different weapons and added two big engines (I should have added one) and i also added some glows and I am working on the doodads also I am thinking of what can add to detail the ship itself.
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Re: Possibly you don't wanna look at it
I wanna build a ship based of a game, a rogue like called Faster Than Light or FTL for short. any suggestions on how i should start it?
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Uh, I'd recommend that you don't. The shape and composition is quite bland, and wouldn't translate well to BSF. For example, the ship there could be assembled in right about 5 sections. Which is something that is bad.
naysayers will be shot
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Is this a risk? I gonna build DST/Shiny ship, hopefully it succeeds.
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Im going to add another post to post more ships.
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Yeah, maybe you could've just used one engine instead of two, but other than that, pretty good.izmad510 wrote:um i added different weapons and added two big engines (I should have added one) and i also added some glows and I am working on the doodads also I am thinking of what can add to detail the ship itself.
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Re: Possibly you don't wanna look at it
did you finish your DST?Shiny ship?izmad510 wrote:Is this a risk? I gonna build DST/Shiny ship, hopefully it succeeds.
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It seems he hasn't.
Quite frankly I wonder why I ever began making ships for this. You see, my work never becomes quite as good as I feel it deserves to.
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I abandoned the idea of the Shiny ship hybrid.... I couldn't think of ideas.