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PostPosted: Thu May 14, 2015 3:57 pm 
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This is my first time, I'm nervous.
:D Any suggestions how i can improve the corvette in aesthetics?


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PostPosted: Thu May 14, 2015 11:46 pm 
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Well, first of all, you may want to add some screenshots to that.


As for the ship itself, I like it. I think it's well shaded and coloured, the sectionwork is decent, the weapons look fine on it all. It could use some finer details and doodading. There also seems to be a spot where some large engine would go, yet there are no sections that really look like thrusters or anything of the sort. If you add a more engine-esque section, I'd suggest also adding an engine glow and maybe a thruster module. But other than that, nice ship.

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PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2015 7:31 am 
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um i added different weapons and added two big engines (I should have added one) and i also added some glows and I am working on the doodads also I am thinking of what can add to detail the ship itself. :lol:


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PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2015 8:19 am 
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I wanna build a ship based of a game, a rogue like called Faster Than Light or FTL for short. any suggestions on how i should start it?Image


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PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2015 9:46 am 
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Uh, I'd recommend that you don't. The shape and composition is quite bland, and wouldn't translate well to BSF. For example, the ship there could be assembled in right about 5 sections. Which is something that is bad.

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PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2015 1:18 pm 
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Is this a risk? I gonna build DST/Shiny ship, hopefully it succeeds.


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PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2015 2:07 pm 
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Im going to add another post to post more ships.


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PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2015 10:16 pm 
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izmad510 wrote:
um i added different weapons and added two big engines (I should have added one) and i also added some glows and I am working on the doodads also I am thinking of what can add to detail the ship itself. :lol:

Yeah, maybe you could've just used one engine instead of two, but other than that, pretty good.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 17, 2015 10:46 am 
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izmad510 wrote:
Is this a risk? I gonna build DST/Shiny ship, hopefully it succeeds.


did you finish your DST?Shiny ship?

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 14, 2015 3:13 pm 
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It seems he hasn't.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 18, 2015 4:26 pm 
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I abandoned the idea of the Shiny ship hybrid.... I couldn't think of ideas. :(


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