Miram Off topic ships.

Miram · Post by **Miram** » Sun May 26, 2013 9:42 pm

STARSTRUCK wrote:It's a decent ship but fuck that core. Anyway, let's go.

"I'm wanna using" should be either "I'm using" or "I want to use".

Any time you're about to say "I'm wanna," (for instance) just mentally redact it to "I want to". "I'm" is a contraction of "I am," where "am" is the verb to-be, as in "I am a terrible person who needs to die". "I'm wanna" expands to "I am want to," which is more or less a string of vomit.

I think that should fix about a quarter of your grammar faults.

thank you I am wanna follow you grammar tips.

Post by **Anna** » Sun May 26, 2013 10:18 pm

... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Miram · Post by **Miram** » Sun May 26, 2013 11:16 pm

seriously Anna you reached the max level of be a fucking asshole can you stop be a fucking asshole for one minute?
my fucking christ get fuck off with that stupid thing

Doogie12 · Post by **Doogie12** » Sun May 26, 2013 11:35 pm

Except that Starstruck gave you a piece of advice on how to not make a mistake, and in thanking him for that YOU MAKE THE EXACT SAME MISTAKE.
It's not like you're typing this out so you can sit down and think about what you're saying for a minute. Oh wait...

Also he's a site admin so I'd be cautious with the name calling.

Miram · Post by **Miram** » Sun May 26, 2013 11:38 pm

Doogie12 wrote:Except that Starstruck gave you a piece of advice on how to not make a mistake, and in thanking him for that YOU MAKE THE EXACT SAME MISTAKE.
It's not like you're typing this out so you can sit down and think about what you're saying for a minute. Oh wait...

Also he's a site admin so I'd be cautious with the name calling.

But its not necessary be a asshole and post a video Thats throw at my face that I'm have made a mistake

Deltaflyer · Post by **Deltaflyer** » Mon May 27, 2013 12:31 am

I think I love you, Anna.

Also let's be honest, you let yourself in for a sarcastic (read: humourous) rebuttal when you deliberately repeated the grammatical error.

Doogie12 · Post by **Doogie12** » Mon May 27, 2013 1:17 am

Miram, you really don't quite get Anna. He's an asshole, yes, but an extremely lovable one. That video was a use of sarcastic humor to point out the very stupid mistake you pulled.

Miram · Post by **Miram** » Mon May 27, 2013 1:39 am

Let's back to topic!

In this one I've made/edited 2 Battleships
Before I'm continue add effects and etc it which one is better?

Danny420Dale · Post by **Danny420Dale** » Mon May 27, 2013 2:06 am

I think I like the second one a bit better. Also, bravo zulu Anna.

Miram · Post by **Miram** » Mon May 27, 2013 5:01 am

doodads doodads every!

Doogie12 · Post by **Doogie12** » Mon May 27, 2013 5:11 am

That's not a whole lot of doodads. The center area looks really cluttered.

Necrontyr1998 · Post by **Necrontyr1998** » Mon May 27, 2013 6:38 am

I feel like crying now I've read this topics page.

Danny420Dale · Post by **Danny420Dale** » Mon May 27, 2013 7:05 am

Aaand he went with the other version. I'm really not fond of that bow shape, either even if I like the shape it reminds me of IRL

Miram · Post by **Miram** » Mon May 27, 2013 7:48 am

Danny420Dale wrote:Aaand he went with the other version. I'm really not fond of that bow shape, either even if I like the shape it reminds me of IRL

Don't be sad danny!
I've choose the another one because its moar big!

Ambitious Builder · Post by **Ambitious Builder** » Mon May 27, 2013 8:59 am

I have chosen the other one because it is bigger.
^That is the proper wording. Is it really that hard to check? I have trouble with grammar but that's... Just try, please just try!

Sidenote: If you ask for comments and criticism then consider it after its given, especially when its intended to be helpful!

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