The Harbringer Class Battleship

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The Harbringer Class Battleship

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my second ship on the forum its still not done yet it needs more work but this one is gonna be smoking hot (for me its smoking hot but its up to you guys since i know criticism is always at the top priority) well here you go
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Name: Harbringer Class Battleship

im not that creative when it comes to painting so its gonna be tough and i need a little help for it (just a request of course if you want to help ill post the file tommorow)
enjoy :)
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Ummm. you can't just make a new thread for every ship. just use one for all your ships. However, i'm not a mod so its not my place to yell at you. On the ship, It looks a bit cluttered and thrown together, but has some interesting features and a decent shape. just try to clean it up with some Tiling and like I said in your previous post, More doodads and coloring.
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I actually really like this for some reason. The overall shape I think... That said, I would do some heavy shading or color decals, and work on those gaps and some of the sectionwork that clashes...Quite nice for an early try though!
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^I know what shape I'll make next.
To be honest, the sectionwork kinda sucks. However, theres not much of a way to improve this other than keep building, lurk more, etc. Basically just get a feel for how shiny sections fit together. Sure it does take a little, but the rewards are spectacular ---> viewtopic.php?f=2&t=5696
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Re: The Harbringer Class Battleship

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had a little bit trouble on what doogie said it was a little hard of course Here's my progress
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think i need to add more?
hmm i don't know what kind of color i should use on this
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added some doodads
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shamrocksoldier wrote:Ummm. you can't just make a new thread for every ship. just use one for all your ships. However, i'm not a mod so its not my place to yell at you. On the ship, It looks a bit cluttered and thrown together, but has some interesting features and a decent shape. just try to clean it up with some Tiling and like I said in your previous post, More doodads and coloring.
what tiling?
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Updated. colored and changed it a little and added weapons
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Much better! Like seriously, that looks quite nice. I thoroughly look forward to your future endeavors.
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Doogie12 wrote:Much better! Like seriously, that looks quite nice. I thoroughly look forward to your future endeavors.
Thanks. :D
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