newbie Intergo ships

[kittenpillar100]

Hi I'm new to the forums and I have made some ships, I thenk they are ok however I would like some constuctive critcizm plz.

the backstory of the intergo

Spoiler!

the intergo are a race of spined humanoids, their weaponry outmathces the terrans several times however there ships aren't as beefy as their enemies. At first the humans didn't trouble them and the worked togeter well however when a pirate destroyed an intergo frigatte the intergo guessed it was a human and took it personally. The intergo armada struck hard destroying several human planets in it's wake but was held back by some EOS leviathans. the war has been going on for 123 years and the humans are growing weaker each time however the intergo are still trying to find ways of defeating the deraded EOS.

some ships will come as soon as I work out how to put an image in

[Krictic]

Hello!
try put more details about your race in the Databank forum, it will be cool if you exand the universe.
Im waiting for your designs!
=D

[calvin1211]

Use the image tags like such:

Code: Select all

[img]http://imageurlhere[/img]

You have to upload pictures to a image hosting site first though. (Which is not hard, try imageshack or photobucket.)
Or just upload them as an attachment with the post.
Also: Capital letters. Grammar. Use them.

[Krictic]

i reccomend use this site, is easy and you can add multiple images at once.
http://www.imagehost.org/
=)

[kittenpillar100]

Well thanks

defence frigate


combat frigate


support frigate


technical frigate


blockade corvette

thats for now capital ship coming soon

and now something new!

[kittenpillar100]

God I forgot to put in a PERIOD. Oops everything else too, probably because I suck at english.

Now Anna doesn't have to be angry!

[Krictic]

wow!
i liked it!
but, a question, why these ships are so similar?
look at the 3 spikes.
but well, i liked they.

how do you put these colours? or its just the texture

=)

[kittenpillar100]

well not to say your a noob but thy are all frigates (apart from spiky corvette)

[Krictic]

You have a point, but im saying that variation is good, i think.
try diferent designs...
=)




and yes, im somewhat noob in this.
=/

[kittenpillar100]

if it's variation you want it's variation you get
(bigger this time)

Spoiler!

the capital ship of the Intergo

Offensive:
1 Twin artillery gun
4 broadside mounted heavy guns
2 light machineguns
1 'rod from hell' torpedo

Defensive:
4 heavy flak

Systems:
1 Fighter Runaway
4 ion thrusters
1 Advanced 'Battle Spine' system

Edit:

Spoiler!

The Intergo Battleship is a very recent addition to the armada and has been fully field tested, it utilises better thruster technology than it's counterpart: the capital ship however it has less armour. It also has an array of plasma and energy weapon as well as the most advanced battle spine system on the market. The lord of rot is very pleased whenever he is given the amazing technology in this ship.

Offensive:
6 Broadside heavy plasma guns
4 Lightweight energy guns; two on the portside and two on the starboard
2 Medium energy guns on the bow
1 Central Kinetic Barrage Gun

Defensive:
Nil

Systems:
4 Concentrated ion thrusters
1 Synapse linked advanced battle spine array

[jwa8402]

Actually I'm glad your maintaining their use throughout your designs. Links them together as one race; like maybe its part of some technology they rely on. Weapons could be integrated better...And that big gap is a bit distracting, will it have a glowy core or something?

[kittenpillar100]

Actually I'm glad your maintaining their use throughout your designs. Links them together as one race; like maybe its part of some technology they rely on. Weapons could be integrated better...And that big gap is a bit distracting, will it have a glowy core or something?

soz I din't have a long enough sprite to be a runaway

but I'll see if I can update it

race database I am soon going to add the intergo

[Krictic]

The spines its like a Race Characteristic or something? its special?

but really cool ship!
i liked!

[kittenpillar100]

look at the database for the intergo, the spines are well taktikal.

[kittenpillar100]

a sortov pic of intergo (horrible yes) I'll work on it

da-daaaaaaa suks kinda