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lon3wolf
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lone wolf creations

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Noob just starting out in this universe. My creation/s so far
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Re: lone wolf creations

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ummm soooo many!!! where are the creations? welcome to the forums by the way.
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Thank you. I forgot to upload them. The first of what i hope to be many models is:
The Jurgen Neolite
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Re: lone wolf creations

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Not half bad actually, depthing and section usage at the front is poor, im not sure about the little wings either, but with a splash of colour this could look good, now weaponise it add nice looking engine nozzles and your sorted :)
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Re: lone wolf creations

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It's actually not that bad. It has a clearly defined shape, no overly stretched sections, and *gasp* no weapon spam! Actually, no weapons at all, which I would keep with atm. It looks really nice, though you should really flesh the design out more. Add some Greeblies. OTT, this is a really nice ship.
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Re: lone wolf creations

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I have now added weapons to the ship. I still can't decide what to do with the front yet so i've created two variations.
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This is the Jurgen Skite it is a troop carrier.
This is the Jurgen Skite it is a troop carrier.
This is the Jurgen Skreet (can't think of a better name atm) it's a small gun ship.
This is the Jurgen Skreet (can't think of a better name atm) it's a small gun ship.
Variation 1.
Variation 1.
Variation 2 with thrusters.
Variation 2 with thrusters.
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Re: lone wolf creations

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Very nice, much better than my first ships. I like the style you've got going with them all and they definitely fit well together. My one quip with them though is that some of the wing placements do look a little flimsy, but other than that good going. :)
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Re: lone wolf creations

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Very nice, much better than my first ships. I like the style you've got going with them all and they definitely fit well together. My one quip with them though is that some of the wing placements do look a little flimsy, but other than that good going. :)
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Re: lone wolf creations

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The overall shape of all four ships will improve if the front end of the ships tapered down to a point, rather being really blocky and flat. And i agree with Baigent, in that there are parts on the last two ships where the sections get really narrow, it makes those points look really fragile
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Re: lone wolf creations

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The update.
I have started work on the front and also made the wings look stronger.
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Jurgen Neolite v5
Jurgen Neolite v5
A small attempt at a bio-ship. I've called it a bio-leech. It's a spore based creature.
A small attempt at a bio-ship. I've called it a bio-leech. It's a spore based creature.
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Re: lone wolf creations

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I liked the variants with the "flimsy-looking" wings better. They had a really unique look.
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Re: lone wolf creations

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Agreed. When done right, that fragile look can make a ship seem far more advanced. Not a bad start on the bioship either, though it looks like it has eyes at both ends...
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