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HorseMonster
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Post by HorseMonster »

I made a spaceship that isn't made entierly out of sections I made myself.

This is sufficiently unusual that I felt like posting.

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Post by Kiltric »

Shiny, although the front seems a bit mismatched against the rest of the ship. If on the two front-most sections were changed, it would be an improvement.

That aside, I very much like what you've done with the engines. It gives the impression that the four engines on the sides fold into the ship and close up.

Also, how did you add the orange decals? Did you add them directly to the sprites as a custom, or use a separate sprite?
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Post by jwa8402 »

Simple but nice design. Those stripes lend a homeworld look to it.
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Post by Silver Swordsman »

The front style does not correspond with the back. Try something more pointy for the front. Also, we BSF shipbuilders are a bit more used to looking at ships facing right--might as well flip the picture.
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Post by Chiiro »

Silver Swordsman wrote:The front style does not correspond with the back. Try something more pointy for the front.
The roundness of the front looks fine, really, the problem is it's got two right angles up at the front that could use some covering up.
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Post by vVhorpax »

I love the ships simplicity, I´m not a fan of angled engines in general, but it works. Also nice choice of colours.
This is an perfect example,that you haven´t overload a ship with details to get an awesome ship, alsoI don´t care if you give a shot from right to left or left to right, I can think in n-dimensions. (neN)
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Post by HorseMonster »

The stripes are square/rectangular sections set to additive blending for the information of people who hadn't guessed.

Changed the front around a bit. Also has some weapons.

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Post by LactoseTolerant »

The rear engine sticks out too much. Kinda looks like a handle. Stripes are a nice touch.
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Post by Kaelis »

That is a sweet little ship you have there. I love it.
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Post by HorseMonster »

Aaaand a metagame specification version.

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Post by Silver Swordsman »

Suggestion:

Either make the side spikes more pronounced, or shrink the rear one. Also, given that the end is "spikey", you should also consider on conforming to that style in the front. Spikey and Smoothie do not mix.
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Post by HorseMonster »

For some utterly inexplicable reason I suddenly felt incredibly driven to make this spaceship. I don't like it at all, but I couldn't stop myself from making it. Got to love them sudden violent urges.

Perhaps I will shipmaker it some more later and it will be more pleasing to look at.

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Post by Silverware »

Doesn't look all that... violent atm.
Looks like some suped up civilian race ship atm.
Which in itself is cool.
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Post by inteuniso »

Yeah it doesn't look that good Looks like the lovechild of vHorpax's ships and the pod racer. *shudder*
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Post by Danny420Dale »

Add a couple fins to the back and a cockpit in the nose (maybe with a gatling gun?) and it looks like a good homage to the dropship in Alien.
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