Comic featuring Ratai and Miora colonies.
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Comic featuring Ratai and Miora colonies.
I will make short comic featuring Ratai and Miora colonies. Not sure about how frequently I will update this, but goal is least to make few pages per week.
Here we start. Page 1.
Here we start. Page 1.
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Page 2. Hopefully the Mior ships are correct enough. I tried little bit different drawing methods this time. Not sure was it better or worse... quite happy with the image regardless.
Oh noes! Will the little destroyer crash into that Miora ship!!?
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Page 3. In my opinion better than two previous. Still practicing though. Quality is to increase further this goes.
Comments, criticism, suggestions, etc are welcome.
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That is awesome. Something different from the beautiful ships, but just as stunning.
Now working on those nice needle beamers. Beware!
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Thank you ( ^u^)
SAR ships will appear later in the comic too \( ^o^)/ now that Calvin gave permission. That will be far further though.
Next page will be coming up somewhere in next week. Little busy ATM.
SAR ships will appear later in the comic too \( ^o^)/ now that Calvin gave permission. That will be far further though.
Next page will be coming up somewhere in next week. Little busy ATM.
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Roar! Page 4 outlines. I start to work on colors by tomorrow after work. Not dead here.
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this is impressive moar i say!
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i can't say im impressed since i've already saw too much of my friend's drawing in school. his name is 47Reaperz in deviantART
but it impressed me a little because mostly he draws lycan or a human dragon kissing a girl or SAO battles something like that
but MOAR pls
but it impressed me a little because mostly he draws lycan or a human dragon kissing a girl or SAO battles something like that
but MOAR pls
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Delphinus Gulf Wars (Formerly War for the Universe)
Coalition of Terra
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Cryoware Enterprises, where ideas go
Cryoware Heavy Yards, Heavy ships
Delphinus Gulf Wars (Formerly War for the Universe)
Coalition of Terra
Quote of the occasion: It takes one man to change the world
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Wot happened? Seems I skipped comic quite a bit and drew this scene instead - cause I just missed the smell of burning ships in outer space. I shall add this picture to panel inside comic once we get this far - assuming I ever will. Left text out for now as the plot is not 100% set.
This picture shows how utterly just handful of darkness ships (or just one big one) have wiped out Ratai guardian fleet. The guardian fleet is responsible of protecting ratai's back as they travel forth in the universe. It is this fleet that will be the first line of defence against Darkness. At the current guardian fleet (or what is left of it) is five systems behind the core fleet.. Guardian ships can be told apart from normal ships of Ratai from their red stripes on their hull.
Just several weeks after Ratai have made first contact with Miora and begun process of traveling through their system(s) - as well as form plans on how to get through SAR space that is far more hostile towards Ratai than Miora - not granting passage for armada 26.000 ships (no wonder there - that could be invasion fleet) - the admirality loose contact with the Guardian fleet. Protocol states that replacement is to be deployed immidietly and Ratai send two fleets, in total of over 400 ships to replace guardian fleet - or to determine why it has not reported in. one of these 400 ships is our already familiar angel class destroyer - whom again is to handle the near suicidal recon mission. Miora also deploy few ships, mainly to gather intel on Darkness and to test first hand how quite unique weapons of Miora work against Darkness in contrast to Raitai's heavily kinetic based armament. Strangely, the ship to accompany Alysium (our friendly destroyer) - is the very ship they crashed into in first place. Perhaps this is some gesture of friendship or to make up for earlier misunderstandings - but the crew of mineret certainly do not know into what trouble they have got themselves into.
The scene opening before them after jump however might give some suggestions.... utter destruction. Most of the wreckage is still in formation - suggesting that ships were destroyed near instantly. Many of the transponders are still broadcasting friendly ID, but there are no single life sign present. None of the ships have even launched their escape pods.
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I will from now on submit comic - or pretty much all of my BSF related pictures to Deviantart under account Da-Ronin. Hopefully it will bring some life to this forum. Latest picture now stands here. http://da-ronin.deviantart.com/art/The- ... -354864299
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nice
check out my friend named 47reaperz and you can see his arts and might give you some ideas about the art styles
check out my friend named 47reaperz and you can see his arts and might give you some ideas about the art styles
Creations
Cryoware Enterprises, where ideas go
Cryoware Heavy Yards, Heavy ships
Delphinus Gulf Wars (Formerly War for the Universe)
Coalition of Terra
Quote of the occasion: It takes one man to change the world
Cryoware Enterprises, where ideas go
Cryoware Heavy Yards, Heavy ships
Delphinus Gulf Wars (Formerly War for the Universe)
Coalition of Terra
Quote of the occasion: It takes one man to change the world
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(o. o ) Well.. uh. http://47reaperz.deviantart.com/ ?
There are lot of muscle creatures and some wolves. No space ships. (o. o)? You sure thats right one?
There are lot of muscle creatures and some wolves. No space ships. (o. o)? You sure thats right one?
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well that will give you some hints of what shadows are supposed to look like
or maybe im just talking nonsense again but his gore drawings are the best
last time i remembered he made a SAW trap with a man with it (Of course) getting his guts like it was being ripped apart by a deadspace necro
or maybe im just talking nonsense again but his gore drawings are the best
last time i remembered he made a SAW trap with a man with it (Of course) getting his guts like it was being ripped apart by a deadspace necro
Creations
Cryoware Enterprises, where ideas go
Cryoware Heavy Yards, Heavy ships
Delphinus Gulf Wars (Formerly War for the Universe)
Coalition of Terra
Quote of the occasion: It takes one man to change the world
Cryoware Enterprises, where ideas go
Cryoware Heavy Yards, Heavy ships
Delphinus Gulf Wars (Formerly War for the Universe)
Coalition of Terra
Quote of the occasion: It takes one man to change the world
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Whos faction are those with red team sprites anyway
Creations
Cryoware Enterprises, where ideas go
Cryoware Heavy Yards, Heavy ships
Delphinus Gulf Wars (Formerly War for the Universe)
Coalition of Terra
Quote of the occasion: It takes one man to change the world
Cryoware Enterprises, where ideas go
Cryoware Heavy Yards, Heavy ships
Delphinus Gulf Wars (Formerly War for the Universe)
Coalition of Terra
Quote of the occasion: It takes one man to change the world