A work in progress
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A work in progress
So here it is, a screenshot of my first ship that I'm actually going to share with the community. It's still a work in progress, though. I'm not extremely happy with it, and I would want some constructive criticism to help me build ships better.
Ayup.
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Rock lobster!
*music*
In seriousness though... it doesn't look bad to me? Unless the parenting is wrong or something. I'm not sure what you could add or take away from it. It looks "done" to me.
As for ship building, I don't think it's something you can learn by other people telling you much. It's like art, you need to develop your own style.
*music*
In seriousness though... it doesn't look bad to me? Unless the parenting is wrong or something. I'm not sure what you could add or take away from it. It looks "done" to me.
As for ship building, I don't think it's something you can learn by other people telling you much. It's like art, you need to develop your own style.
The thing is, I have no idea how to arm this. Also, do you think the head needs some redoing, because I think that it doesn't resemble a crayfish (yes it is supposed to be a crayfish) at all. The tail needs to extended a little bit as well.TormakSaber wrote:Rock lobster!
*music*
In seriousness though... it doesn't look bad to me? Unless the parenting is wrong or something. I'm not sure what you could add or take away from it. It looks "done" to me.
As for ship building, I don't think it's something you can learn by other people telling you much. It's like art, you need to develop your own style.
The Boz, I appreciate the giant enemy crab reference, but this is a crayfish.
Ayup.
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Mmmmmm, craWfish. Who's got the Zatarain's? I'm suddenly craving Etouffee with a bowl of Gumbo. While you're at it, who here likes Zydeco music.
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OM NOM NOM NOM! We have a yearly crawfish boil at one of my dad's buddies house, one of the best times of the year, right when spring meets summer down here, not too hot, not too cold.Danny420Dale wrote:Mmmmmm, craWfish. Who's got the Zatarain's? I'm suddenly craving Etouffee with a bowl of Gumbo. While you're at it, who here likes Zydeco music.
But, yes, the claws look quite robotic, you might want to add a bit of curve to them, and widen the distance between the claws. Also, perk up the antennae, it looks like an angry cockroach with pincers!
I'm not dead yet! I've finished the Crayfish,as well as another smaller shrimp-like ship. Here is a screen shot demonstrating both of their capabilities.
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Ayup.
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