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My Junkyard

Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 4:47 pm
by crvenimajmun
Hey people,this is my junkyard and ships i make will be here.Say how nice or ugly is the ship,good or bad is builded.
This is my new ship.

Re: My Junkyard

Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 8:09 pm
by Imaillusion
The colours are really off-putting. I'd change that first, prefably to just a grey, and then work from there

The gaps that I can see along the centre of the hull should be filled up, that should be done second

The shading also needs to change, but that doesn't really matter at the moment, with the crappy colour scheme. It's just something to keep in mind when you recolour the sections

Re: My Junkyard

Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 12:07 am
by 25000st
The color scheme itself is fine IMO. The problem is that the colors haven't been used in a very effective way to make the ship interesting or show depth.
The ship is generally bland. I'd reconsider the shape of the gray section you have on your ship. The orange front looks like it's been glued onto a flat gray front even in thumbnail size.

Re: My Junkyard

Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:26 am
by crvenimajmun
Well i keep that in mind.

Re: My Junkyard

Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 12:33 pm
by crvenimajmun
This is my newest ship i build.

Re: My Junkyard

Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 3:29 am
by thenoobiebuilder
It looks like a headless humanoid on its side :shock:
nice ship but it looks like its backwords




TNB

Re: My Junkyard

Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 8:35 am
by Kiltric
This looks decent. There is nothing blatantly bad about the section usage and layout. It does look a bit plain though. It would help a lot if you were to use different shades of gray to give a sense of dimension to the ship.
Also, it's more of a nitpick, but the solid line cutting through the center of your ship doesn't look great. I think the shading is the important thing to develop, but for future reference...

Re: My Junkyard

Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:55 pm
by Silver Swordsman
I see jumble and clutter and no sense of what internal placement. Looks like my first ships, in which pieces were slapped on however you liked. Plan a bit more next time.