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New ship from the De'vor shipyards! Now with less spam!

Posted: Mon May 31, 2010 3:30 am
by thenoobiebuilder
heh heh heh yes the subject HAD to be that :wink:
The ship in question is sadly unnamed.
Its is a mix be tween a destroyer and a cargo ship (evil isn't it?)
What looks like a railgun is a particle cannon

That is all :roll:

Re: New ship from the De'vor shipyards! Now with less spam!

Posted: Mon May 31, 2010 8:23 pm
by Imaillusion
It's... plain, I guess, nothing too flashy but thats's okay.

The actual detailing on the ship, how the sections are fitting together, is actually done really well. Unfortunatly it's let down by the boxy shape of the ship.

Re: New ship from the De'vor shipyards! Now with less spam!

Posted: Mon May 31, 2010 10:47 pm
by inteuniso
It's an alright ship. The front section seems to be out of place. Thank you for not putting too many weapons on, and the railgun looks nice.

For coloring: The gray seems to clash with the teal. Try grayscale first, then move on to other colors.

Re: New ship from the De'vor shipyards! Now with less spam!

Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 12:30 am
by jwa8402
Imaillusion wrote:The actual detailing on the ship, how the sections are fitting together, is actually done really well.
um...the wings are 5 sections slapped on top of eachother...don't get me wrong, the overall shape is fine as a cargo ship and since its not SW sections they all blend together, but beyond that it looks slapped together. I think you could do some good things with this but the color combination is really...unfortunate. Maybe develop the story more and it will help you develop the ship.

Re: New ship from the De'vor shipyards! Now with less spam!

Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 2:36 am
by thenoobiebuilder
Wow
And I though everyone would hate it :roll: !
The ship is boxy because its a CARGO ship
I'll try the grey-scale idea and see how that turns out
I was trying to make the front as close to what a real ship would look like but I had to improvise.I'll redo that and get back to you

I already know the story behind it and yes i'll tell you it
The (sadly unnamed) was designed during the great war of 3448.
U.P hoped it would allow them to get supplies to and from the U.P headquarters on earth.
The (sadly unnamed) was designed to be a cargo ship with the ability to defend itself from the destroyers guarding the planet.
There are two known versions of the (sadly unnamed).
A version with hyper drive and a version without.
The version with hyper drive only had 30,000 megatons of storage.
The version without hyper drive had 60,000 megatons of storage.
The first thing you will notice about the (sadly unnamed) is that the
support sections look like they were just slapped onto the frame.
The support sections were designed to look like that so the enemy would aim for them instead of their real weak spot.
The (sadly unnamed)'s support sections are really the most armored parts of the ship.
The ships main flaw is that the fuel tanks are very close to the rear armor, so one well aimed hit would destroy them.

Re: New ship from the De'vor shipyards! Now with less spam!

Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 8:39 pm
by Imaillusion
jwa8402 wrote:words
I was actually only referring to the dark teal-coloured area. I agree about the wings; that was just lazy, how they ended up (no offence intended).

With the storyline... seriously, why did you write the story first, and not figure out the name of your ship? Do you want your (sadly unnamed) ship to be referred to as the (sadly unnamed) ship forever? :roll:

Re: New ship from the De'vor shipyards! Now with less spam!

Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 6:15 am
by thenoobiebuilder
Well to tell you the truth the ship came first,30 seconds later the story came
The ship is (sadly unnamed) because I have already used all the names I can think of!
Hum... wait a minute! I got it!
I'll name the ship ...
Don't you think ... I know awesome right!


:lol:
The ship's new name is...Recore!