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Re: My second ship!

Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 12:04 am
by lionm12
I made a new ship and its my favorite here it is !

Re: My second ship!

Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 5:21 am
by James510
I like the design IMO. The sharp edges highlighted by the purple glow makes it seem like an alien animal of some sort, ready to attack.

Re: My second ship!

Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 8:44 pm
by Imaillusion
It's a bit skinny in some areas, might want to add more sections to those places. The light grey sections don't really work with the purple, thay contrast a bit too much. The purple sections/glows themselves aren't too bad though

Re: My second ship!

Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 12:53 pm
by LactoseTolerant
Not bad, the violet/purple outline is good, the overall shape is okay. It seems to be somewhat unfinished, as the back part where the engines would be doesn't seem to be there. Interesting development with the glowy core in the mid-rear of the ship, i'd like to see that worked with some more. The outline is a bit jagged, along with the internal work, but it's still passable. I'd recommend matching up some of the "lines" on the sprites to alleviate this.

Re: My second ship!

Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 10:32 pm
by alive916
LactoseTolerant said right. violet glow is not too suitable for a grey ship body. I think cyan or light blue are better. They have a plasma, reacting flame feel. For violet glowing, I prefer to use red/blue/light blue ship body.

Secondly, I suggest the side wings of the ship have a feather design, like your third posted ship.

Re: My second ship!

Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 9:49 pm
by Silver Swordsman
I think the shape of the ships are excellent, better than anything I can come up with, but I think coloring can use some change. Just a tad less pink IMO

Re: My second ship!

Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 2:55 am
by lionm12
I finaly had some time to create a ship cus in 3 months I'll be in college , here it is !!

Re: My second ship!

Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 8:30 pm
by Imaillusion
I like the colour scheme and the section work, it has this brutal, macabre feel to it. It's kinda menacing in that way

What ruins it, unfortunatly, is the fact that the sections around the centre and back areas are rather bland, by comparison. They just don't have that deathly, imposing feel about them. Fix that, and keep using that style, it's really good

Re: My second ship!

Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 8:41 pm
by lionm12
Yet another one of my ships.

Re: My second ship!

Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 2:12 am
by jwa8402
I really do like the second one, not so much the red glares, but we don't get many vertically longer ships like that. I think you could do something really nice with this one.

Re: My second ship!

Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 8:23 pm
by Imaillusion
To be honest, you should just get rid of the glowy parts at the back or soften them, they contrast way too much. The ship itself is okay, but it doesn't have the same sort of styling as the ship before, which is a real shame, the other one was a lot better

Re: My second ship!

Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 9:42 pm
by lionm12
Muhahaha my latest creation !!!

Re: My second ship!

Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 10:48 pm
by Preacher
Dude i think these are inspired! keep making ships like these thay are awesome, kinda remind me of cylon ships from galactica

Re: My second ship!

Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 11:25 pm
by lionm12
I made another ship, my new ships are just rolling in !!

Re: My second ship!

Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 8:28 pm
by lionm12
I have upgraded my last ship!